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my dearest my masterpiece


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"sure mom, i'll be right back, i've got to finish my homework"
the excuse works everytime
i slip the blade under my shirt
into my waistband
slide into my room
the cold envelops me
i twist lock
my heart skips when i hear the click
i listen to my family
the giggles
the happiness
the fakeness
no regrets
just anxious
i grab at the blade and touch it to my wrist
my canvas
i am the painter
my blade
the brush
my blood
the ink
in a flash i feel the anticipation
creeping through my veins
hungry for the metal
i press down and begin
to create
yet another addition to my masterpiece
i close my eyes
sigh
breathe in
breathe out
the numbness of my life
is once again
enriched by the pain
embellishing what was dull
to create a wonderful bliss
eyes open
the crimson blossoms from my pearly white skin and
trickles
down my arm
i wisper
i love pain
and begin to laugh
my veins push out their gift to my sheets and i watch the
dreary funeral
the pain becomes comfort
my only friend
i hear the wispering footsteps on the stairs
i hide the blade
cover my blood stained sheets
all the time smiling on the outside
dying on the inside
i pull my sleeve down just as the door knob
twists
all evidence gone
i see her head
"dinner's ready. are you done?"
i smile
"yes, mother. homework is finished."
yes, mother...i am finished...for tonite

my masterpiece needs to dry
before
i can add my
next addition

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very VERY good....
i know the feeling...
extremely well put.....
10 stars!**********
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wow...thats all i can say...awsome poem...so emotional...i love it...the whole thing behind it and the comparisons...if we rated poems youd get two thumbs, 10 stars whatever...keep them coming..
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wow, thanx.. i didn't really plan that, i just got on here and started typing like crazy...my class thought i wuz nuts because of my frenzied fast typing ...they couldn't see because i had it under my other project im wrking on so...
but yeah thanx guys...
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Ohhh, that gave me chills...Ive NEVER cut before, and havent even thought about it.

You just let me into the Emo mind...wow...creepy.
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Aw sad
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I love it it is beautiful.
I love things that are like that.

it made me cry is is amazing.

Demi
xoxox
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You know what makes me cry?

http://www.emo-corne...topic.php?t=643
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wow, thanx.. i didn't really plan that, i just got on here and started typing like crazy...my class thought i wuz nuts because of my frenzied fast typing ...they couldn't see because i had it under my other project im wrking on so...
but yeah thanx guys...
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o my gosh i do that too....
doesnt it seem like sometimes ur best ones come the quickest??
like in the heat of the moment when u are feeling o so inspired??
thats how some of mine R for me..
like when i feel like im at the lowest point in my life, i pick up the pen and start to write, and dont look back on it or stop till its on paper...
then i look back and i love it, cuz it captured Xactly how i felt at that moment.
it was very good..:-)
keep writing grrl..
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Ohhh, that gave me chills...Ive NEVER cut before, and havent even thought about it.

You just let me into the Emo mind...wow...creepy.

um, no ofense, that sounds realy mean to say wow creepy.....
u may not have meant it that way>>??
but it sounds so mean...
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no, i know what he means...sometimes to be inside an emo head can be a mind-shattering, insane ride...that leaves u feeling...drained

and i live in this funny little carnival i call my mind.

heh.
>_<
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no, i know what he means...sometimes to be inside an emo head can be a mind-shattering, insane ride...that leaves u feeling...drained

and i live in this funny little carnival i call my mind.

heh.
>_<

lol
i kno watcha mean..
i was just liek "hey..." :Cry:
lol
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ok is it just me or was that the deepest poem ive ever heard?
i mean who needs long descriptive words when you can just use the simplest words?
Most excellent my friend...i almost started to cry...so awesome...
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wow-e
thanx yall
i wrote it down and showed it to my friends and this girl and guy that i like were both fighting over it cuz they wanted to read it over and over again, then when they were done they both gave me a big hug and i wuz like, awww.

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>_<
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haha! thats cute...ive read it like 6 times now...lol!
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>_<
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haha! thats cute...ive read it like 6 times now...lol!

yeah, every time i read it, im like, woah, i wrote that!
lol

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Wow! That really is an awsome poem! I think all the emotions are so clear, it makes you compare it with your own life.
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poem is sooo good
have read it loads of time just kept reading coz it is that good
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thanks u guyz... tongue.gif
my friends r funny about that, they say i can't kill myself until the most innocent and pure of our friends has a baby, does drugs, and makes out with a guy!!!

i am going to die of old age.

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