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Lullaby Sorrow


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Lullaby Sorrow

Crying, slowly dying
As you sing me to death

Telling tales of night
Telling tales of things that arent right

Singing me a Lullaby Sorrow
Will i still be here tomorrow?

I am so sick of lying,
As i've given up on trying

Singing me to death
Slowly my eyes are closing

Breathing stops
Word in chaos
World shatters
As you still sing
Lullaby Sorrow

Will the world make it through to tomorrow
I wont because you've already sung me to death

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wow, that was deep.
i love it!! smile.gif
keep up the good work!
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dude your awesomeeeeee

keep up the good work, i luv the heading lullaby sorrow the most


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QUOTE (Xx-black-and-white-xX @ Mar 22 2008, 12:51 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
dude your awesomeeeeee

keep up the good work, i luv the heading lullaby sorrow the most



Thanks hey feel free to have a look at my other poems that are on here or go to my page i would be interested to know what you think of them smile.gif
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it is really deep. the title fits it great. i love it, keep writing.

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wew!....very good Big Grin.gif

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QUOTE (xXxSlipping AwayxXx @ Mar 21 2008, 10:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wow, that was deep.
i love it!! smile.gif
keep up the good work!



QUOTE (GreenWithEnvy @ Mar 22 2008, 05:17 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
it is really deep. the title fits it great. i love it, keep writing.

-GreenWithEnvy



QUOTE (CutmeDeep @ Mar 22 2008, 10:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wew!....very good Big Grin.gif


Thanks guys i love to see that you understand that my poems are deep and what nots. Hope to head from ya all soon and hope for some more feedback ok bye

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