Created in a Waste land. With parents cruel and abusive.
Tears are sewn into my eyes, and my screaming never seems to fade.
The scars will fade in time, and as i get old, the lonleyness i feel is almost uncontrolable. My temptation for self harm is too great for my own good.
Why doesn't anyone love me?
The very question i have asked myself every time i dragged the razor across my wrist. I stare down at my arm. I have drained all the blood. Now only blackness spills out.
I deplore the day i entered this world.
I should have known life would turn out this way.
I was a fool to believe you. Believing the monsoon would come and stop my pain forever. Drowning this hateful town, and everybody in it.
but it didnt.
The world is a joke; and as it laughs at me.
I disentagrate into the shadows. To never return again.[/b]
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Turning to Blackness
Started by
*Abattoir-Asphyxiate*
, Nov 10 2007 07:00 PM
#1
Posted 10 November 2007 - 07:00 PM
#2
Posted 10 November 2007 - 07:09 PM
thats sad
but in a good way
but in a good way
#3
Guest__*
Posted 10 November 2007 - 10:34 PM
(xxxjulz10xxx)
thats sad
but in a good way
but in a good way
^agree^
Tears are sewn into my eyes
-i've never read a verse(whatever you call it) like that
creative/good
#4
Posted 10 November 2007 - 10:38 PM
That's a really good peom. I can tell you wrote it from your heart
#5
Posted 10 November 2007 - 10:41 PM
thank you guys for you comments i apreciate it very much
i did write it from my heart and yea hope you enjoy it
i did write it from my heart and yea hope you enjoy it
#6
Posted 10 November 2007 - 10:45 PM
(MyBlackHeartBeats)
Created in a Waste land. With parents cruel and abusive.
Tears are sewn into my eyes, and my screaming never seems to fade.
The scars will fade in time, and as i get old, the lonleyness i feel is almost uncontrolable. My temptation for self harm is too great for my own good.
Why doesn't anyone love me?
The very question i have asked myself every time i dragged the razor across my wrist. I stare down at my arm. I have drained all the blood. Now only blackness spills out.
I deplore the day i entered this world.
I should have known life would turn out this way.
I was a fool to believe you. Believing the monsoon would come and stop my pain forever. Drowning this hateful town, and everybody in it.
but it didnt.
The world is a joke; and as it laughs at me.
I disentagrate into the shadows. To never return again.[/b]
Tears are sewn into my eyes, and my screaming never seems to fade.
The scars will fade in time, and as i get old, the lonleyness i feel is almost uncontrolable. My temptation for self harm is too great for my own good.
Why doesn't anyone love me?
The very question i have asked myself every time i dragged the razor across my wrist. I stare down at my arm. I have drained all the blood. Now only blackness spills out.
I deplore the day i entered this world.
I should have known life would turn out this way.
I was a fool to believe you. Believing the monsoon would come and stop my pain forever. Drowning this hateful town, and everybody in it.
but it didnt.
The world is a joke; and as it laughs at me.
I disentagrate into the shadows. To never return again.[/b]
very passionate...
i am sorry for u... :_(
i too have felt that kind of pain, wherre there is nothihng left inside but black emptiness...
very good job:-)
#7
Posted 24 November 2007 - 12:58 AM
i'm here for you... i love you...
(really good poem) but now i'm all sad...
*collapses in a sobbing heap*
(really good poem) but now i'm all sad...
*collapses in a sobbing heap*
#8
Posted 24 November 2007 - 06:39 AM
Wow, t's very good, I'm sure alot of us can relate to this poem, very good and sad
#9
Posted 24 November 2007 - 04:27 PM
(zooei)
Wow, t's very good, I'm sure alot of us can relate to this poem, very good and sad
hey thanks guys especailly you jay lol;)
#10
Posted 25 November 2007 - 01:36 AM
#11
Posted 03 December 2007 - 01:52 PM
nice poem
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