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Turning to Blackness


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Created in a Waste land. With parents cruel and abusive.
Tears are sewn into my eyes, and my screaming never seems to fade.
The scars will fade in time, and as i get old, the lonleyness i feel is almost uncontrolable. My temptation for self harm is too great for my own good.
Why doesn't anyone love me?
The very question i have asked myself every time i dragged the razor across my wrist. I stare down at my arm. I have drained all the blood. Now only blackness spills out.
I deplore the day i entered this world.
I should have known life would turn out this way.
I was a fool to believe you. Believing the monsoon would come and stop my pain forever. Drowning this hateful town, and everybody in it.
but it didnt.

The world is a joke; and as it laughs at me.
I disentagrate into the shadows. To never return again.[/b]
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thats sad
but in a good way
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thats sad
but in a good way


^agree^

Tears are sewn into my eyes

-i've never read a verse(whatever you call it) like that
creative/good

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That's a really good peom. I can tell you wrote it from your heart
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thank you guys for you comments i apreciate it very much
i did write it from my heart and yea hope you enjoy it
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Created in a Waste land. With parents cruel and abusive.
Tears are sewn into my eyes, and my screaming never seems to fade.
The scars will fade in time, and as i get old, the lonleyness i feel is almost uncontrolable. My temptation for self harm is too great for my own good.
Why doesn't anyone love me?
The very question i have asked myself every time i dragged the razor across my wrist. I stare down at my arm. I have drained all the blood. Now only blackness spills out.
I deplore the day i entered this world.
I should have known life would turn out this way.
I was a fool to believe you. Believing the monsoon would come and stop my pain forever. Drowning this hateful town, and everybody in it.
but it didnt.

The world is a joke; and as it laughs at me.
I disentagrate into the shadows. To never return again.[/b]

very passionate...
i am sorry for u... :_(
i too have felt that kind of pain, wherre there is nothihng left inside but black emptiness...
very good job:-)
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i'm here for you... i love you...
(really good poem) but now i'm all sad...

*collapses in a sobbing heap*
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Wow, t's very good, I'm sure alot of us can relate to this poem, very good and sad sad.gif
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Wow, t's very good, I'm sure alot of us can relate to this poem, very good and sad sad.gif


hey thanks guys especailly you jay lol;)
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nice poem
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