Everything falls apart.
These walls of trust crumble.
Blackness fills my heart,
my thoughts start to tumble.
Surrounded in a crowd,
but so alone inside.
Laughing out loud,
unable to confide.
My friends pull me away,
replacing the pain.
But what happens when they leave?
I'll go insane.
Love is sacred,
but oh so rare.
I don't think I can make it,
I'm too scared.
My vision clouds over,
my head starts to ache.
The tears start to flow over,
but I stop them for my sake.
All alone I stand,
my memories in hand.
With no where to run to,
where happiness isn't banned.
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1st Poem.
Started by
x-Allison
, Apr 28 2008 07:22 PM
#1
Posted 28 April 2008 - 07:22 PM
#2
Posted 05 May 2008 - 04:28 PM
QUOTE (x-Allison @ Apr 28 2008, 08:22 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Everything falls apart.
These walls of trust crumble.
Blackness fills my heart,
my thoughts start to tumble.
Surrounded in a crowd,
but so alone inside.
Laughing out loud,
unable to confide.
My friends pull me away,
replacing the pain.
But what happens when they leave?
I'll go insane.
Love is sacred,
but oh so rare.
I don't think I can make it,
I'm too scared.
My vision clouds over,
my head starts to ache.
The tears start to flow over,
but I stop them for my sake.
All alone I stand,
my memories in hand.
With no where to run to,
where happiness isn't banned.
These walls of trust crumble.
Blackness fills my heart,
my thoughts start to tumble.
Surrounded in a crowd,
but so alone inside.
Laughing out loud,
unable to confide.
My friends pull me away,
replacing the pain.
But what happens when they leave?
I'll go insane.
Love is sacred,
but oh so rare.
I don't think I can make it,
I'm too scared.
My vision clouds over,
my head starts to ache.
The tears start to flow over,
but I stop them for my sake.
All alone I stand,
my memories in hand.
With no where to run to,
where happiness isn't banned.
that WAS sssooooo GREAT!!!! i know how u feel.
#3
Posted 10 May 2008 - 05:36 PM
That poem was awsome, mine sucked, it didn't even ryme. please... check mine out anyway, it is called Sad Feelings
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