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Cigarette In Yr Bed


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Emotronic

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Falling down
I like to watch you
Crawl around

Arms untied
Scratching your eyes out
With a smile
Strange stare
Strangled by the blade left
In your heart

I glide by
Slip a cigarette
In your bed
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Wicked!

Although I hope the cigarette you slipped in the bed is unlit because you could start a fire.
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If it could start a big fire and destroy the whole humanity including me then I would be happy.
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Oh well that's alright then.
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QUOTE (ExCrEmEnT_@_tEa @ May 5 2008, 12:20 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Wicked!

Although I hope the cigarette you slipped in the bed is unlit because you could start a fire.


Yea I don't think after scratching someone's eyes out that burning them would really be such a big concern.
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QUOTE (Hast @ May 5 2008, 08:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Yea I don't think after scratching someone's eyes out that burning them would really be such a big concern.



What if they were born blind?
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a bloody good poem, congrats, Mr Emotronic !!!
I like it a lot.
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Awesome poem, except now I'm craving nicotine more than ever, and I'm trying to quit...

But it was good!
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