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I Love You


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Idk tell me if you like it

I love you with heart you brought back to life
i love that you care so much to keep from a knife
I love that my smile was caused by you
i love that through all the lies you stayed true
i love that no matter how far you are always there
i love when i cry you always seem to care
i love that my hand is all you hold
i love how you warm my heart when it is cold
i love your voice when you say you love me
i love how you set my locked soul free
i love how you relieve the pain
i love how you kiss me in the rain
i love you gorgeous green eyes
i love love how you always seem to make me talk when i am shy
i love you since the very first day
when you brought color to my life of grey
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my name is Derek

is this dedicated to me
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I wish my name was Derek...
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lol wait whats that supposed to mean
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wow is my poem that bad that no one wants to reply
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Who's Derek ?
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much, much better than the poems I make
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Beautiful poem
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Derek is my boyfriend......i love him is you hadn;t already noticed.
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you love me? aww that's so sweet
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Broken Heart.gif I wish you were single and I lived in Florida...
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awww thank you. lol
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QUOTE (x.suicidalkiss.x @ May 5 2008, 05:16 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
my name is Derek

is this dedicated to me

lol unless your last name is slayter then no
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hey my name is derek and my last name is slayter
is it for me? Love.gif
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^^ Lucky you !!! !!!
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lol obviously... I LOVE YOU
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QUOTE (x.suicidalkiss.x @ May 6 2008, 04:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you love me? aww that's so sweet

ummm i dont think you are my bf so yeahhh.lol I know you were jk tho
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this is a really great poem, although its a bit confusing. your lucky derek! tongue.gif
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