Gosh . . . that is sad. that really truly sux. No kid should live thro sh*t like that.
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I Won't Let You Go.
Started by
ΜıƶƶЈǝяκ
, Sep 10 2008 07:33 PM
#41
Posted 10 November 2008 - 12:13 PM
#42
Posted 13 November 2008 - 02:44 PM
Oh wow, that poem is amazing!
It made me cry. =[
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It made me cry. =[
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#43
Posted 13 November 2008 - 08:06 PM
wow... :| that's really sad and it's a great poem. even if u had sucked at writing, ur message is so powerful.
#44
Posted 26 November 2008 - 06:20 PM
#45
Posted 27 November 2008 - 01:27 PM
QUOTE (MaxeenMASSACRE @ Nov 10 2008, 10:48 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I admire you.
I'm sorry to hear about your mom.
Your poem is amazing though.
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I'm sorry to hear about your mom.
Your poem is amazing though.
x
Thank you
She's better now.
thanks.
QUOTE (RedMouth @ Nov 10 2008, 12:13 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Gosh . . . that is sad. that really truly sux. No kid should live thro sh*t like that.
Tell me about it.
QUOTE (Keira*BOOMurder @ Nov 13 2008, 02:44 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Oh wow, that poem is amazing!
It made me cry. =[
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It made me cry. =[
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Im sorry for making you cry. but thanks alot <3
QUOTE ((sweet.emo) @ Nov 13 2008, 08:06 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wow... :| that's really sad and it's a great poem. even if u had sucked at writing, ur message is so powerful.
yea it is.
QUOTE (instanthell @ Nov 26 2008, 06:20 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
hey i luv the poem
thank you
#46
Posted 29 November 2008 - 05:11 PM
thats so sweet i think im gonna cry......
#47
Posted 30 November 2008 - 10:23 AM
believe it or not that is my life story....
really good and it has a lot of emotion!
keep writing
really good and it has a lot of emotion!
keep writing
#48
Posted 02 December 2008 - 08:33 PM
i have never ever read a poem dat makes me cry
you ve got deh potential.
you ve got deh potential.
#49
Posted 06 December 2008 - 11:41 AM
QUOTE (мe+eмo♂=Lϖ @ Sep 10 2008, 11:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't have much to say...I think this says it all.
.:I Won't Let You Go:.
A week I had waited;
For the phone to ring;
And for the doctor to tell us;
It was all just a dream.
The night they came in;
I was on the very edge;
I knew I should be prepared;
For whatever was ahead.
The way she had looked;
When she hung up the phone;
Her eyes were empty;
And I felt alone.
I knew the answer;
To this horrible question;
My mom had cancer;
And I have depression.
What would happen;
If I had to live;
Without my hero and mom;
The results were positive.
Who would have thought;
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.
I promise you this;
You won't end up dead;
'Cause you?ll take my life;
And you'll live instead.
Through all of this;
I think you should know;
That I love you and promise;
I won't let you go.
© Copyright by Taylor Ensminger 2008-Forever
.:I Won't Let You Go:.
A week I had waited;
For the phone to ring;
And for the doctor to tell us;
It was all just a dream.
The night they came in;
I was on the very edge;
I knew I should be prepared;
For whatever was ahead.
The way she had looked;
When she hung up the phone;
Her eyes were empty;
And I felt alone.
I knew the answer;
To this horrible question;
My mom had cancer;
And I have depression.
What would happen;
If I had to live;
Without my hero and mom;
The results were positive.
Who would have thought;
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.
I promise you this;
You won't end up dead;
'Cause you?ll take my life;
And you'll live instead.
Through all of this;
I think you should know;
That I love you and promise;
I won't let you go.
© Copyright by Taylor Ensminger 2008-Forever
Very Beautiful... I lost my mom to cancer... loved ur poem...
#50
Posted 07 December 2008 - 01:03 AM
Vary good poem
#51
Posted 24 December 2008 - 01:36 AM
that was great.
i dont know how to post my poem
here i am again, in a shelf. alone and crying
confused with myself, thinking about dying
trying to prevent the darkness invading my weak soul
but i cant stop myself from crying and being drowned
they say theres always a solution in every problem
but im running out of solution so i always suffer
i always cry, yeah, that all i can do
waiting for her to say she likes me too
im afraid to tell what i really feel for her
maybe she will not accept me or ignore me rather
all i can do is to keep this as a secret
and make myself suffer again and add to my regrets
i dont want to be hurt again thats why im afraid to tell
the feeling that i will keep maybe it will burst someday
if that happens please understand
and try to accept me and let me show you my love.
i dont know how to post my poem
here i am again, in a shelf. alone and crying
confused with myself, thinking about dying
trying to prevent the darkness invading my weak soul
but i cant stop myself from crying and being drowned
they say theres always a solution in every problem
but im running out of solution so i always suffer
i always cry, yeah, that all i can do
waiting for her to say she likes me too
im afraid to tell what i really feel for her
maybe she will not accept me or ignore me rather
all i can do is to keep this as a secret
and make myself suffer again and add to my regrets
i dont want to be hurt again thats why im afraid to tell
the feeling that i will keep maybe it will burst someday
if that happens please understand
and try to accept me and let me show you my love.
#52
Posted 24 December 2008 - 02:49 PM
QUOTE (xxx__b_r_o_k_e_n__xxx @ Nov 29 2008, 05:11 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
thats so sweet i think im gonna cry......
awwh thanks. dont cry hun. ^^
QUOTE (emomazingchik228 @ Nov 30 2008, 10:23 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
believe it or not that is my life story....
really good and it has a lot of emotion!
keep writing
really good and it has a lot of emotion!
keep writing
Thank you ^^
QUOTE (hEi! @ Dec 2 2008, 08:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
i have never ever read a poem dat makes me cry
you ve got deh potential.
you ve got deh potential.
Well thanks =D
QUOTE (Shadow_Lover @ Dec 6 2008, 11:41 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Very Beautiful... I lost my mom to cancer... loved ur poem...
Omg I'm so sorry. Hang in there.
thanks
QUOTE (Moderator @ Dec 7 2008, 01:03 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Vary good poem
thank youu
#53
Posted 29 December 2008 - 10:33 PM
It's really good. It expresses your feelings for your mom and how much you love her. I wish I had a good relationship with my parents. Great Job, though.
#54
Posted 08 January 2009 - 05:44 AM
QUOTE (мe+eмo♂=Lϖ @ Sep 10 2008, 06:03 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't have much to say...I think this says it all.
.:I Won't Let You Go:.
A week I had waited;
For the phone to ring;
And for the doctor to tell us;
It was all just a dream.
The night they came in;
I was on the very edge;
I knew I should be prepared;
For whatever was ahead.
The way she had looked;
When she hung up the phone;
Her eyes were empty;
And I felt alone.
I knew the answer;
To this horrible question;
My mom had cancer;
And I have depression.
What would happen;
If I had to live;
Without my hero and mom;
The results were positive.
Who would have thought;
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.
I promise you this;
You won't end up dead;
'Cause you?ll take my life;
And you'll live instead.
Through all of this;
I think you should know;
That I love you and promise;
I won't let you go.
© Copyright by Taylor Ensminger 2008-Forever
.:I Won't Let You Go:.
A week I had waited;
For the phone to ring;
And for the doctor to tell us;
It was all just a dream.
The night they came in;
I was on the very edge;
I knew I should be prepared;
For whatever was ahead.
The way she had looked;
When she hung up the phone;
Her eyes were empty;
And I felt alone.
I knew the answer;
To this horrible question;
My mom had cancer;
And I have depression.
What would happen;
If I had to live;
Without my hero and mom;
The results were positive.
Who would have thought;
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.
I promise you this;
You won't end up dead;
'Cause you?ll take my life;
And you'll live instead.
Through all of this;
I think you should know;
That I love you and promise;
I won't let you go.
© Copyright by Taylor Ensminger 2008-Forever
wow i cant say i relate to it but that made me cry good job
#55
Posted 14 January 2009 - 08:15 PM
QUOTE (XxApatheticXDeathwishxX @ Dec 29 2008, 10:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's really good. It expresses your feelings for your mom and how much you love her. I wish I had a good relationship with my parents. Great Job, though.
Why thank ya! =D
QUOTE (XXlozza.darkandsensitiveXX @ Jan 8 2009, 05:44 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wow i cant say i relate to it but that made me cry good job
Thank youuu <3
#56
Posted 07 February 2009 - 10:25 AM
I Like The Poem Its Good, Kinda Depresing tho
#57
Posted 07 February 2009 - 07:18 PM
That's a really good poem. I liked it It was sad..but amazing.
#58
Posted 08 February 2009 - 08:41 AM
awesome poem...you very talented.
i admire you...i couldnt write souch a good poem...
and...sorry 4your mom.
i admire you...i couldnt write souch a good poem...
and...sorry 4your mom.
#59
Posted 28 February 2009 - 08:48 PM
Thank you to the people who replied!
Please keep commenting though! <3
Much love,
Taylor<3
aka Nikki
Please keep commenting though! <3
Much love,
Taylor<3
aka Nikki
#60
Posted 28 March 2009 - 11:45 PM
[quote name='мe+eмo♂=Lϖ' date='Sep 10 2008, 07:33 PM' post='346932']
I don't have much to say...I think this says it all.
aww~ that's so sad~ i love my mom the way i love my self~
"not all stories ends with a happy ending but if we keep on believing the person who lost in our life will never die cuz' they are living inside our loving hearts~" - i made it~
I don't have much to say...I think this says it all.
aww~ that's so sad~ i love my mom the way i love my self~
"not all stories ends with a happy ending but if we keep on believing the person who lost in our life will never die cuz' they are living inside our loving hearts~" - i made it~
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