Mom, I've got a secret
But I'm not sure if I'm ready to tell
When I whisper it in your ear
Please don't say I'm going to hell
Please treat me like your daughter
I need to know that you accept
Don't make me think that the truth
Is a secret I should've kept
Maybe you'll still love me...
I'm just letting my hopes get too high
But I'm not sure how long I can keep this up
There is hurt with every lie
Maybe if I tell you
You'll join me in silence this year
This secret is so hard to let out
It's your hate that I fear
Will you still love me?
Or will things between us change?
I know that once I tell you
Your views about me will be rearranged
Before I share my secret
I wanna know what you'll do or say
So let me ask you this question;
Mom, will you still love me if I'm gay?
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Mom, I Have A Secret
Started by
e the e
, Dec 20 2008 08:35 PM
#1
Posted 20 December 2008 - 08:35 PM
#2
Posted 20 December 2008 - 08:51 PM
This is the best poem I've ever read. 5/5
#3
Posted 20 December 2008 - 08:56 PM
QUOTE (Schinosky @ Dec 20 2008, 10:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This is the best poem I've ever read. 5/5
I wouldn't say best, but thanks.
#4
Posted 20 December 2008 - 09:23 PM
That was awesome.
#5
Posted 20 December 2008 - 09:31 PM
Thanks I'm glad you think so
#6
Posted 20 December 2008 - 10:31 PM
that was a great poem erin.
5/5
5/5
#7
Posted 20 December 2008 - 10:33 PM
QUOTE (AlexSpera @ Dec 21 2008, 12:31 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
that was a great poem erin.
5/5
5/5
Thanks, Alex
#8
Posted 20 December 2008 - 11:10 PM
-applauds- awesome (H)
#9
Posted 21 December 2008 - 12:24 AM
nice poem. . . i think this is poem will be the poem of the month . . .
#10
Posted 21 December 2008 - 07:43 AM
Great poem.
I really like it.
I really like it.
#11
Posted 21 December 2008 - 07:47 AM
i normally read poems on here and wonder why i clicked the link.
but thanks erin very good i love it.
but thanks erin very good i love it.
#12
Posted 21 December 2008 - 08:08 AM
I love it Erin
-rates 5-
-rates 5-
#13
Posted 21 December 2008 - 08:40 AM
duuuuuuude.. that was pro.. now cover it in syrup and give it to mummy
#14
Posted 21 December 2008 - 09:00 AM
Great Great Great Job erin!
I know how you feel!
And I do say, when the time is right and if your mum loves you (im sure she does) tell her, that way you dont live life scared or nervous, it will take allllllll the weight of your shoulders GOOD LUCK!
I know how you feel!
And I do say, when the time is right and if your mum loves you (im sure she does) tell her, that way you dont live life scared or nervous, it will take allllllll the weight of your shoulders GOOD LUCK!
#15
Posted 21 December 2008 - 09:53 AM
simply amazing
#16
Posted 21 December 2008 - 10:04 AM
QUOTE (♫HaSeOxTh♫ @ Dec 21 2008, 02:24 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
nice poem. . . i think this is poem will be the poem of the month . . .
Haha thanks for saying that, but it can't win. Reasons why: I didn't enter it in the contest, and it doesn't work with the theme.
QUOTE (lastonestanding @ Dec 21 2008, 11:00 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Great Great Great Job erin!
I know how you feel!
And I do say, when the time is right and if your mum loves you (im sure she does) tell her, that way you dont live life scared or nervous, it will take allllllll the weight of your shoulders GOOD LUCK!
I know how you feel!
And I do say, when the time is right and if your mum loves you (im sure she does) tell her, that way you dont live life scared or nervous, it will take allllllll the weight of your shoulders GOOD LUCK!
Thanks, but my mom already knows.
Last night I was reading over some of my journal entries from a while ago, and I remembered trying to come out to my mom. Then the words just kind of came out and I wrote a poem about it =)
My mom already knows I'm gay and she's completely fine with it.(yey)
Thanks everyone
#17
Posted 21 December 2008 - 10:31 AM
I loved it, Erin!
5/5
5/5
#18
Posted 21 December 2008 - 10:47 AM
It's got a good rhyme [skeem] and structure.
Conveys your feelings and thoughts very well.
It is a tad cliche though.
But all in all, very good poem.
I'd give it a 4.8/5.
^.^
Conveys your feelings and thoughts very well.
It is a tad cliche though.
But all in all, very good poem.
I'd give it a 4.8/5.
^.^
#19
Posted 21 December 2008 - 11:02 AM
Rawr thanks for the comment and critisism.
#20
Posted 21 December 2008 - 11:25 AM
that was a brilliant poem indeed......perfect rhyming scheme, good mood setting, and a wonderful ending with the question...loved it
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