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So Far Away


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Heres a new one of mine.

So Far Away

So far away your eyes.
Looking only into darkness.

So far away your lips.
Complete, expressionless silence.

So far away your shoulder.
Nowhere to rest my head.

So far away your heart.
Nothing real to listen to.

So far away your hands.
Thinking of your gentle touch.

So far away your legs.
No one to stand next to.

So far away you are.
Wishing you were near.

So far away you are.
No one to share my love.
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Tell me what yous peoples thinks of me poem...please. smile.gif
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it bought a girl from the past to mind.... geeee tnx :wink:
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it bought a girl from the past to mind.... geeee tnx :wink:


Aww, Im sorry...I hope I didnt re-break your heart again. :Cry:

Thats not what I would want to do to you... :wink:
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lol its kool... great poem by the way
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Thnx Jayson! biggrin.gif
Glad you like it.
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i like it a lot...
it sounds a lot like a poem this one guy wrote for me after i broke up with him...
almost made me take him back :_(...
translation:
its a good poem :-)
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Danke!
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I love it
:oops: i love it
i don't know wat to say man
good work.

Demi
xoxox
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Danke. Mein Gut Man. tongue.gif
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Nichts zu danken!

hee hee

Demi
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Nichts zu danken? Bitte! Danke! Danke!


btw...I cheated and used a translator on this.

I only know Danke, Bitte, unt Gutentag...LOL
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lol
u cheat

lol
the funniest thing i know
is

Heil Mien Herr Hitler *does the nazi salute* lol
I was sort of a neo nazi a while ago lol.

Demi
xoxox
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:shock: Ohhhh...how did that go... :?
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it was fun as hell like i loved it
that was for me mean side lol.
then i went back to emo
which was helping with me emotions lol

but my mean side loved it
lol all the fights i was getting into lol
i loved it.
i wore a black skin tight t-shirt with no sleves
Black Combat trouser's and Black steel toe caped Military
Assualt Boots.

lol like one kick and they were out.

Demi
xoxox
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it was fun as hell like i loved it
that was for me mean side lol.
then i went back to emo
which was helping with me emotions lol

but my mean side loved it
lol all the fights i was getting into lol
i loved it.
i wore a black skin tight t-shirt with no sleves
Black Combat trouser's and Black steel toe caped Military
Assualt Boots.

lol like one kick and they were out.

Demi
xoxox


:shock: Umm, yeah...can you say...fucked up...LOL
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i love it lots. ^.^
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Altoid: I loved being a neo nazi just not many jews going about now
adays lol, but there is a boy that gets called jew. so me kept running
at him lol, for a laugh of course lol.

iheartmusic: it is good isn't it smile.gif

Demi
xoxox
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