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Skinny, Pretty, Buff, It'll Never Be Good Enough.


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Oblivion.

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Its the ongoing war
Between food and you,
It controls your mind,
Its controlling you,
Your bones jut out,
Your clothes are too big,
Still your mirror bears the abuse,
Cries of 'Pig!'

Theres lipstick on your mirror,
That marks your face,
circles and x's,
Say that its in the wrong place,
Girls envy your face,
And guys turn on their charms,
The don't see the other side,
The cuts on your arms,

You work hours on yourself,
For the body of your dreams,
With push ups, weights,
And dieting schemes,
The girls adore you,
Other guys give you fame,
But they don't see the needles,
The source of your shame.

Skinny, Pretty, Buff,
Perfects never good enough.

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Wow, this is simply amazing, nothing else to say, just amazing. I really like your writing styles, and you've got a great way of expressing what your trying to. I also like the topics you pick for your poems, all in all, simply amazing.
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Thanks very much. I like getting feedback ^^
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really love it.....
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I love it...simple as that.
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omf this is just real, honestly. beautiful execution
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Thanks to all =]
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Days since I last pissed
Cheeks sunken and despaired
So gorgeous sunk to six stone
Lose my only remaining home
See my third rib appear
A week later all my flesh disappear
Stretching taut, cling-film on bone
Im getting better
Karen says Ive reached my target weight
Kate and emma and kristin know its fake
Problem is diets not a big enough word
I wanna be so skinny that I rot from view
I want to walk in the snow
And not leave a footprint
I want to walk in the snow
And not soil its purity
Stomach collapsed at five
Lift up my skirt my sex is gone
Naked and lovely and 5st. 2
May I bud and never flower
My visions getting blurred
But I can see my ribs and I feel fine
My hands are trembling stalks
And I can feel my breasts are sinking
Mother trys to choke me with roast beef
And sits savouring her sole ryvitta
Thats the way youre built my father said
But I can change, my cocoon shedding
I want to walk in the snow
And not leave a footprint
I want to walk in the snow
And not soil its purity
Kate and kristin and kit kat
All things I like looking at
Too weak to fuss, too weak to die
Choice is skeletal in everybodys life
I choose, my choice, I starve to frenzy
Hunger soon passes and sickness soon tires
Legs bend, stockinged I am twiggy
And I dont mind the horror that surrounds me
Self-worth scatters, self-esteems a bore
I long since moved to a higher plateau
This disciplines so rare so please applaud
Just look at the fat scum who pamper me so
Yeh 4st. 7, an epilogue of youth
Such beautiful dignity in self-abuse
Ive finally come to understand life
Through staring blankly at my navel.
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really beautiful executed. can feel the emotion there.
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this was awesome. a really good poem one i rly enjoyed cuz, its so simple and still so true.. u remind of a guy called Dan túrell famous writer. but if u wanna copy the style he had small sentences and was very fast like something new always was about to happend he was looking on other ppls and spectating them while he was showing his own feelings trough the ppls , very deep , and still so simple..

ok im out xD i drink too much ... ( coke )
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Two words:

Absolutely excellent.
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Sad but true. the world has special criteria of whats 'beautiful' and if you dont fit that mold, you'd have to work so hard to get there, and sometimes the pay off isn't worth it.
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