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Applause.
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Good...Job

(You dont even know how hard I try to get to anything marked (Best) or get something pinned
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Not a fan of commenting on something I'm not able to do well myself.

For this poem I wanted to make an exception. I felt genuinely increasingly sad as I read on.

I can't think of how to describe it other than to say... That is a very, very powerful combination of words.
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hey, if you ever want to talk imhere. especially cause i know that poem was written upon truth. iv been there too. message me back!
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It made me feel very sad... wow... deserves to be one of the best poems smile.gif
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Yeah, This is a 100% re-read <3

Pure excellence im sure my buddy Poe-fannieo will love it too!
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QUOTE (ejayjay @ Feb 8 2010, 10:18 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Holy cow its like good night Timmy in newgrounds >.<


I have no idea what that means... thanks though!

QUOTE (Forzare? @ Feb 8 2010, 11:40 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Btw guize, just because he's written about it doesn't necessarily mean that's happened to him...


It has... if you're wondering.

QUOTE (Jessticles @ Feb 8 2010, 12:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
True point, I thought of that after posting.

If this doesn't stem from personal experience then you've done a great job of sensitively writing about this subject and putting yourself in the place of the rape victim.

If it does stem from personal experience... my previous points still apply.

Congrats, OP, moving to best poems.


Thank you :]

QUOTE (Noicelfer @ Feb 8 2010, 06:56 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Applause.


Thanks :]

QUOTE (XxArsenic-TrioxidexX @ Feb 8 2010, 07:22 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Good...Job

(You dont even know how hard I try to get to anything marked (Best) or get something pinned


So I win? Yay! (write from life. If your life isn't interesting, write from someone else's life.)

QUOTE (RazorRose @ Feb 9 2010, 09:36 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Not a fan of commenting on something I'm not able to do well myself.

For this poem I wanted to make an exception. I felt genuinely increasingly sad as I read on.

I can't think of how to describe it other than to say... That is a very, very powerful combination of words.


Thank you so much :]

QUOTE (emo 2 no end @ Feb 9 2010, 10:55 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
hey, if you ever want to talk imhere. especially cause i know that poem was written upon truth. iv been there too. message me back!


If you wanna talk, pm me. I don't bite.

QUOTE (XxMizzTroublexX @ Feb 9 2010, 11:16 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It made me feel very sad... wow... deserves to be one of the best poems smile.gif


Thank you :]

QUOTE (XxArsenic-TrioxidexX @ Feb 9 2010, 02:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Yeah, This is a 100% re-read <3

Pure excellence im sure my buddy Poe-fannieo will love it too!


Thanks :]
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Hey I'm new here and I just read your poem it's a good poem though
I just want to ask, can't you do anything about the rape? I'm sorry because it's blunt and I don't know how to ask it.
And I'm apologize if there are grammatical errors in there.
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Wow. That was very detailed and well written. A good writer can form a picture in their readers minds, and you did just that. Thank you for sharing your poem with us


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I had a similar experience to this poem, although, my father just had an obsession with watching other people rape children; I thought I cast these thoughts out completely.
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QUOTE (Oleandrin @ Mar 16 2010, 06:48 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hey I'm new here and I just read your poem it's a good poem though
I just want to ask, can't you do anything about the rape? I'm sorry because it's blunt and I don't know how to ask it.
And I'm apologize if there are grammatical errors in there.


Well, I COULD, but there isn't much of a chance I will.

QUOTE (xxSatinxHeartxx @ Mar 21 2010, 05:54 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Wow. That was very detailed and well written. A good writer can form a picture in their readers minds, and you did just that. Thank you for sharing your poem with us


Thanks for reading it :]

QUOTE (obvious_scar @ Mar 25 2010, 04:27 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I had a similar experience to this poem, although, my father just had an obsession with watching other people rape children; I thought I cast these thoughts out completely.


You'll never cast those thoughts out completely, and if you do, it's called suppression and that's a really bad thing to do... it's why I do the writing. It forces me to think about it, examine it from different angles, justify it, fight with it, and ultimately, live with it.
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QUOTE (Left EC @ Mar 25 2010, 10:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Well, I COULD, but there isn't much of a chance I will.



Thanks for reading it :]



You'll never cast those thoughts out completely, and if you do, it's called suppression and that's a really bad thing to do... it's why I do the writing. It forces me to think about it, examine it from different angles, justify it, fight with it, and ultimately, live with it.



I've had this happen to me. I'll never forget it

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QUOTE (Emo-carebearbaby @ Feb 6 2010, 05:06 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
OMG i can feel the pain its so vivid great detail its awesome

very graphic you werent lyin when you said it.its a damn shame people have to go through it its also a damn shame there's a** holes who would even think of doin such thing to their own kids. ever need some1 to talk to message me or what not.im here for you and any1 who needs to talk to some1.bein in foster care with families who didn care so much to eeven notice me there tought me alot of life lessons so dont think idk your pain even if ima guy.
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QUOTE (Left EC @ Mar 25 2010, 12:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Well, I COULD, but there isn't much of a chance I will.



Thanks for reading it :]



You'll never cast those thoughts out completely, and if you do, it's called suppression and that's a really bad thing to do... it's why I do the writing. It forces me to think about it, examine it from different angles, justify it, fight with it, and ultimately, live with it.

only thing i can say dont is dont let it well up inside yuo it the worst thing to do. it leads to unsurpassed hatred towards other who care and try to help.unfortunatley for me thats what i did and there for i went to visit the loony bin for a stay woo hoo. dont turn to such things as drugs either it makes it worse. but who am i to say what you can and cant do. atleast be happy in a few years youll be outa there tryin to make your life better even if such thing lurks your mind like a houndin dog waitin to attack and kill. its a sad thing to have to experince or kno of some1 that has experincd it.and again as i already posted in earlier posts message me if you ever need to talk with some1. and that goes to any1 and every1.
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[size="6"]That was sickening what appens to so may people...
I've read this two times and every time still
shocks me
amazing disturbig intriging
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wwooowwww!!!! thats very detailed and really good....but sad sad.gif
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Dude when i was raped by my grandfather i cut myself so badly that i had to go into hospital for 3 weeks. I really feel for you no father should do such a thing to there son.
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God...powerful stuff
 

Edited by Jessticles, 02 May 2010 - 10:48 AM.
don't put your own poetry in someone elses topic

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Im in tears so powerful and sad.
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QUOTE (SadEmoSk8ter @ May 2 2010, 03:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Dude when i was raped by my grandfather i cut myself so badly that i had to go into hospital for 3 weeks. I really feel for you no father should do such a thing to there son.


Really? Jesus, thats terrible
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