Heres a new one of mine.
So Far Away
So far away your eyes.
Looking only into darkness.
So far away your lips.
Complete, expressionless silence.
So far away your shoulder.
Nowhere to rest my head.
So far away your heart.
Nothing real to listen to.
So far away your hands.
Thinking of your gentle touch.
So far away your legs.
No one to stand next to.
So far away you are.
Wishing you were near.
So far away you are.
No one to share my love.
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So Far Away
Started by
Guest
, Oct 29 2007 12:06 PM
#1
Guest__*
Posted 29 October 2007 - 12:06 PM
#2
Guest__*
Posted 29 October 2007 - 01:23 PM
Tell me what yous peoples thinks of me poem...please.
#3
Posted 29 October 2007 - 07:54 PM
it bought a girl from the past to mind.... geeee tnx :wink:
#4
Guest__*
Posted 30 October 2007 - 01:39 PM
(OoOLove_or_HateXxX)
it bought a girl from the past to mind.... geeee tnx :wink:
Aww, Im sorry...I hope I didnt re-break your heart again.
Thats not what I would want to do to you... :wink:
#5
Posted 31 October 2007 - 05:46 AM
lol its kool... great poem by the way
#6
Guest__*
Posted 31 October 2007 - 05:59 AM
Thnx Jayson!
Glad you like it.
Glad you like it.
#7
Posted 01 November 2007 - 08:28 AM
i like it a lot...
it sounds a lot like a poem this one guy wrote for me after i broke up with him...
almost made me take him back :_(...
translation:
its a good poem :-)
it sounds a lot like a poem this one guy wrote for me after i broke up with him...
almost made me take him back :_(...
translation:
its a good poem :-)
#8
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 08:36 AM
Danke!
#9
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 09:17 AM
I love it
:oops: i love it
i don't know wat to say man
good work.
Demi
xoxox
:oops: i love it
i don't know wat to say man
good work.
Demi
xoxox
#10
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 09:27 AM
Danke. Mein Gut Man.
#11
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 09:56 AM
Nichts zu danken!
hee hee
Demi
xoxox
hee hee
Demi
xoxox
#12
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 10:15 AM
Nichts zu danken? Bitte! Danke! Danke!
btw...I cheated and used a translator on this.
I only know Danke, Bitte, unt Gutentag...LOL
btw...I cheated and used a translator on this.
I only know Danke, Bitte, unt Gutentag...LOL
#13
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 10:29 AM
lol
u cheat
lol
the funniest thing i know
is
Heil Mien Herr Hitler *does the nazi salute* lol
I was sort of a neo nazi a while ago lol.
Demi
xoxox
u cheat
lol
the funniest thing i know
is
Heil Mien Herr Hitler *does the nazi salute* lol
I was sort of a neo nazi a while ago lol.
Demi
xoxox
#14
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 10:34 AM
:shock: Ohhhh...how did that go... :?
#15
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 10:41 AM
it was fun as hell like i loved it
that was for me mean side lol.
then i went back to emo
which was helping with me emotions lol
but my mean side loved it
lol all the fights i was getting into lol
i loved it.
i wore a black skin tight t-shirt with no sleves
Black Combat trouser's and Black steel toe caped Military
Assualt Boots.
lol like one kick and they were out.
Demi
xoxox
that was for me mean side lol.
then i went back to emo
which was helping with me emotions lol
but my mean side loved it
lol all the fights i was getting into lol
i loved it.
i wore a black skin tight t-shirt with no sleves
Black Combat trouser's and Black steel toe caped Military
Assualt Boots.
lol like one kick and they were out.
Demi
xoxox
#16
Guest__*
Posted 01 November 2007 - 10:45 AM
(Hot Demi is Bi)
it was fun as hell like i loved it
that was for me mean side lol.
then i went back to emo
which was helping with me emotions lol
but my mean side loved it
lol all the fights i was getting into lol
i loved it.
i wore a black skin tight t-shirt with no sleves
Black Combat trouser's and Black steel toe caped Military
Assualt Boots.
lol like one kick and they were out.
Demi
xoxox
that was for me mean side lol.
then i went back to emo
which was helping with me emotions lol
but my mean side loved it
lol all the fights i was getting into lol
i loved it.
i wore a black skin tight t-shirt with no sleves
Black Combat trouser's and Black steel toe caped Military
Assualt Boots.
lol like one kick and they were out.
Demi
xoxox
:shock: Umm, yeah...can you say...fucked up...LOL
#17
Posted 01 November 2007 - 06:16 PM
i love it lots. ^.^
#18
Guest__*
Posted 02 November 2007 - 04:32 AM
Altoid: I loved being a neo nazi just not many jews going about now
adays lol, but there is a boy that gets called jew. so me kept running
at him lol, for a laugh of course lol.
iheartmusic: it is good isn't it
Demi
xoxox
adays lol, but there is a boy that gets called jew. so me kept running
at him lol, for a laugh of course lol.
iheartmusic: it is good isn't it
Demi
xoxox
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