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[competition Entry] Mea Culpa

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Unus Quisnam Somnium:

Mea Culpa
I once slept with a beautiful female,
the state of our bed told quite a tale
and by they by,
she did lie,
it turns out she was a male.

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Thank you for entering the competition Brett. Good luck! biggrin.gif
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Nice entry, hope the others will follow suit soon enough. Pinning.
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QUOTE (unus quisnam somnium @ Nov 10 2010, 04:54 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Mea Culpa
I once slept with a beautiful female,
the state of our bed told quite a tale
and by they by,
she did lie,
it turns out she was a male.


I don't get this line, was it intentional? Or were it meant to be 'by the bye'?

I liked it though, (:
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QUOTE (Hyena. @ Nov 13 2010, 01:30 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Nice entry, hope the others will follow suit soon enough. Pinning.

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QUOTE (Lira @ Nov 13 2010, 03:30 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't get this line, was it intentional? Or were it meant to be 'by the bye'?

I liked it though, (:

Ah yep it was intentional, it has the same meaning as 'by the bye', just a different spelling haha. Colloquialism ftw laugh.gif

Thankyou haha biggrin.gif
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Well done on winning, Iceman! Moving this to Best Poems. Congratulations!
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Awesome! biggrin.gif Im glad the judges liked it laugh.gif
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QUOTE (TickleMeJessmo @ Nov 25 2010, 06:36 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Message me about the colour you'd like and all that shizz yo. This one was definitely my favourite. smile.gif 

Okey dokies smile.gif Nawwww you'll make me blush hahaha tongue.gif
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