Unus Quisnam Somnium:
Mea Culpa
I once slept with a beautiful female,
the state of our bed told quite a tale
and by they by,
she did lie,
it turns out she was a male.
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[competition Entry] Mea Culpa
Started by
Iceman.
, Nov 10 2010 08:54 AM
#1
Posted 10 November 2010 - 08:54 AM
#2
Posted 10 November 2010 - 11:21 PM
Thank you for entering the competition Brett. Good luck!
#3
Posted 10 November 2010 - 11:57 PM
Hahaha no problem and thanks
#4
Posted 12 November 2010 - 07:30 AM
Nice entry, hope the others will follow suit soon enough. Pinning.
#5
Posted 12 November 2010 - 09:30 AM
QUOTE (unus quisnam somnium @ Nov 10 2010, 04:54 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Mea Culpa
I once slept with a beautiful female,
the state of our bed told quite a tale
and by they by,
she did lie,
it turns out she was a male.
I once slept with a beautiful female,
the state of our bed told quite a tale
and by they by,
she did lie,
it turns out she was a male.
I don't get this line, was it intentional? Or were it meant to be 'by the bye'?
I liked it though, (:
#6
Posted 12 November 2010 - 12:02 PM
QUOTE (Hyena. @ Nov 13 2010, 01:30 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Nice entry, hope the others will follow suit soon enough. Pinning.
Cheers man
QUOTE (Lira @ Nov 13 2010, 03:30 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't get this line, was it intentional? Or were it meant to be 'by the bye'?
I liked it though, (:
I liked it though, (:
Ah yep it was intentional, it has the same meaning as 'by the bye', just a different spelling haha. Colloquialism ftw
Thankyou haha
#7
Posted 23 November 2010 - 10:32 AM
Well done on winning, Iceman! Moving this to Best Poems. Congratulations!
#8
Posted 23 November 2010 - 01:38 PM
Awesome! Im glad the judges liked it
#9
Posted 24 November 2010 - 02:43 PM
QUOTE (TickleMeJessmo @ Nov 25 2010, 06:36 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Message me about the colour you'd like and all that shizz yo. This one was definitely my favourite.
Okey dokies Nawwww you'll make me blush hahaha
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