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There?s A Reason These Floorboards Are Shakin?, You Just Haven?t Figured It Out Yet.


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When you?re the only one who feels the ground shaking, and no understands what it is you?re crying about.


When you?re stomach feels like a blender making a homemade milkshake spiked with alchohol.


When you?re down to your last pint of blood from your cuts and still don?t know why you can?t stop thinkin? about her.


When you hear a love song on the radio and you drop to your knees and crie............................


It?s just your heart telling you your in love.

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PRO TIP: "clever" song titles weren't funny when Panic at the Disco did them, blatant ripoffs of those titles aren't funny either.
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that is really good
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QUOTE (Heist @ Mar 26 2008, 07:31 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
PRO TIP: "clever" song titles weren't funny when Panic at the Disco did them, blatant ripoffs of those titles aren't funny either.



Um....Personally, I loved Panic's titles, especially that one...

But when writing your own poetry, it's not a good idea to rip them off. It's pretty annoying actually. Same with any other song title. Part of the talent of poetry writing is originality, that includes the title writing bit.

So yeah, I have to agree with Heist here.
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QUOTE (Objet_Trouve @ Mar 26 2008, 03:44 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Um....Personally, I loved Panic's titles, especially that one...

But when writing your own poetry, it's not a good idea to rip them off. It's pretty annoying actually. Same with any other song title. Part of the talent of poetry writing is originality, that includes the title writing bit.

So yeah, I have to agree with Heist here.


dude i'm sorry,
i didn't kno
i didn't ever
listen to the
whole p!atd
album but
now i see wat
you mean i
can see the
similarity
i had made another
techno song with
the title "settle down
honey, if he wanted
you there he would
have invited you"
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QUOTE (bury this in the woods @_@ @ Mar 27 2008, 10:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
"settle down
honey, if he wanted
you there he would
have invited you"


See? That's a LOT better smile.gif

Don't feel bad....I accidentally re-wrote a Jason Mraz song once. And that black horse and a cherry tree song. It sucked sad.gif

Keep it up kid.
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QUOTE (Objet_Trouve @ Mar 28 2008, 12:26 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Don't feel bad....I accidentally re-wrote a Jason Mraz song once. And that black horse and a cherry tree song. It sucked sad.gif


awwww....
dude thats hilarious
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That was really good.

And I would like to add that PATD is awesome. lol biggrin.gif
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QUOTE (Objet_Trouve @ Mar 26 2008, 04:44 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Um....Personally, I loved Panic's titles, especially that one...

But when writing your own poetry, it's not a good idea to rip them off. It's pretty annoying actually. Same with any other song title. Part of the talent of poetry writing is originality, that includes the title writing bit.

So yeah, I have to agree with Heist here.


MM... Definitely....
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i just came up with
a new title for it:

"i'm not in california, so why do the earthquakes come so frequently?"
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^ I like the new title. biggrin.gif
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really?
thanks i thought
it may have been
to much.
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