A wish
I saw him...
had a thought,
discovered a feeling,
made a wish.
A thought so true and sincere,
a feeling that melt my heart.
A wish so passionate and sweet,
a wish I thought would last.
One day our thoughts met.
His smile revealed a feeling.
An unforgettable moment
gave life to the wish.
But under the shadow of the fear,
the feelings were hidden.
By the river of the reality,
the wishes washed away.
My heart left empty.
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A Wish
Started by
henrik
, May 01 2008 10:12 PM
#1
Posted 01 May 2008 - 10:12 PM
#2
Posted 01 May 2008 - 11:35 PM
Wow.. i love it <3
#3
Posted 02 May 2008 - 03:51 AM
really nice keep it up
#4
Posted 02 May 2008 - 09:21 AM
Not so bad for a first one
#5
Posted 02 May 2008 - 09:39 AM
Good start.
#6
Posted 09 May 2008 - 04:12 PM
QUOTE (DarkLove @ May 1 2008, 10:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
A wish
I saw him...
had a thought,
discovered a feeling,
made a wish.
A thought so true and sincere,
a feeling that melt my heart.
A wish so passionate and sweet,
a wish I thought would last.
One day our thoughts met.
His smile revealed a feeling.
An unforgettable moment
gave life to the wish.
But under the shadow of the fear,
the feelings were hidden.
By the river of the reality,
the wishes washed away.
My heart left empty.
I saw him...
had a thought,
discovered a feeling,
made a wish.
A thought so true and sincere,
a feeling that melt my heart.
A wish so passionate and sweet,
a wish I thought would last.
One day our thoughts met.
His smile revealed a feeling.
An unforgettable moment
gave life to the wish.
But under the shadow of the fear,
the feelings were hidden.
By the river of the reality,
the wishes washed away.
My heart left empty.
This was beautifully sad. I think to admire from afar is an aching feeling, a void unfullfilled. the yearning of what could be. And there lies the problem. We are prisoners of our own mind.
#7
Posted 11 May 2008 - 06:31 AM
Awwww....loved it! Keep writing poems, you're really good at it!
#8
Posted 11 May 2008 - 09:09 AM
That was really good for a first poem!
Keep it up! Your good.
XX
Keep it up! Your good.
XX
#9
Posted 15 May 2008 - 02:47 PM
Hey hon. Loved it. Keep writing homes!
#10
Posted 15 May 2008 - 10:57 PM
QUOTE (Minerva @ May 9 2008, 07:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This was beautifully sad. I think to admire from afar is an aching feeling, a void unfullfilled. the yearning of what could be. And there lies the problem. We are prisoners of our own mind.
Thank you
The second sentence really makes sense,
but I can't understand what are you trying to say with the others O.O
Thank you every1 8>
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