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My 1st Poem


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DeathBringer

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Why am i depressed?
Why am i so alone?

Because of you,

And the pain your puting me through.

Why do i hurt inside?
Why do i hate myself?

Because of you,

And the pain your putting me through


Why do i feel only pain and anger?
Why am i hating everything?

Because of you,

And the pain your putting me through

Why do i cut myself?
Why is nothing good in my life?

When your the only thing to blame...
Because of you my life i coming to a end.


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ForbiddenLove

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its pretty good.
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Azrael.

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Yeah its pretty good, espacially for a first poem.

Keep it up!

xx
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