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And Just Another Poem I Wrote...


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Lol. My 3rd and last not my best poem:

My hearts been torn to pieces,
And I can?t find the bits,
The pieces of my heart have gone with the wind.
I turn to face my house,
I step inside.
Go up to my room and realise,
I have been wasting all my time.
Because of you.
I go to my room,
Write a suicide note.
I write a note to you that says:
?Fuck you?.
I grab the knife and I slit my throat.
I hope you find,
That suicide note...

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Hmm... What happened my poetry thread..? ...il have to find it! biggrin.gif
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QUOTE (VeNnnGeAnCeThouShaltBeMine @ May 3 2008, 01:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hmm... What happened my poetry thread..? ...il have to find it! biggrin.gif


Lol.
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Did you dedicate this poem to me ?
You're so kind.
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QUOTE (BOODY MESS @ May 3 2008, 03:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Did you dedicate this poem to me ?
You're so kind.


Fucking hell NO!

Can sum1 comment SERIOUSLY on this poem?
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My thread is gone... WHO DID IT??! Grr...
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QUOTE (RipleyXXX @ May 3 2008, 05:19 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Fucking hell NO!

Can sum1 comment SERIOUSLY on this poem?

Why don't you like me ?
I was serious, I thought you did that poem to prove me you could use the word fuck.
no ?
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QUOTE (BOODY MESS @ May 3 2008, 05:03 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Why don't you like me ?
I was serious, I thought you did that poem to prove me you could use the word fuck.
no ?


Jesus fucking christ.
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Don't blaspheme the lord ! It's bad.
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QUOTE (BOODY MESS @ May 3 2008, 06:46 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Don't blaspheme the lord ! It's bad.


Did you know that people think of you as someone that is highly on drink and drugs, lives woth his mom and has no life and is retarded?

Just thought you should know.

Now get off my topic unless I see any comments I wanna see.

Ok?
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No. Disagree.
But I'm happy to have loosen you up.
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QUOTE (BOODY MESS @ May 3 2008, 06:46 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Don't blaspheme the lord ! It's bad.
please say you're being sarcastic? "don't blaspheme the lord?" "must worship gawd!" "jeebis is soo good, look at all he has done for us!" ,etc... Christianity is a fucking cult. Ugh, how could my mom baptise me??! Didnt she realise what she was going to be putting me through?! People, there is no escape from catholicism... Youre baptised for life. So THINK before baptising your kids. Eurgh.
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lol, I actually really thought it was dedicated to BOODY MESS :/
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QUOTE (VeNnnGeAnCeThouShaltBeMine @ May 3 2008, 08:14 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
please say you're being sarcastic? "don't blaspheme the lord?" "must worship gawd!" "jeebis is soo good, look at all he has done for us!" ,etc... Christianity is a fucking cult. Ugh, how could my mom baptise me??! Didnt she realise what she was going to be putting me through?! People, there is no escape from catholicism... Youre baptised for life. So THINK before baptising your kids. Eurgh.

Me ? Sarcastic ? I'm just atheist.
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Being catholic or not is a state of mind. I never was baptised though. But if I was I'd know I'm not really. If you're an emo you have to understand the word "philosophy"
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QUOTE (BOODY MESS @ May 3 2008, 09:46 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Don't blaspheme the lord ! It's bad.


I'll tell you what REALLY is bad: having your mind infected with the superstitious nonsense of religion 8>

Even thought I agree in a way; it is stupid to mix exclamations of suprise with an invention of the religious mind.

Back to the theme; I liked the poem 8>
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QUOTE (VeNnnGeAnCeThouShaltBeMine @ May 3 2008, 10:14 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
please say you're being sarcastic? "don't blaspheme the lord?" "must worship gawd!" "jeebis is soo good, look at all he has done for us!" ,etc... Christianity is a fucking cult. Ugh, how could my mom baptise me??! Didnt she realise what she was going to be putting me through?! People, there is no escape from catholicism... Youre baptised for life. So THINK before baptising your kids. Eurgh.

Unfortunately, he didn't mean it as sarcasm; he does REALLY beleive that religion should have privileges in the society.

You made a good point; baptism, as well as childhood-indoctrination are of the worst cases of mental abuse, even thought the religious mind doesn't see them as so; "well, my child can decide when he/she is older!" my stepfather said on baptising my little sister. He shouldn't be blames; his a good person but his mind is infected with religion.
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QUOTE (bongzilla666 @ May 4 2008, 07:47 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
i thought it was about bloody mess too. bloody mess should get more respect around here. he's as emo as they come, even more emo than me. he said he cut himself 36 times today. i only cut myself 23 times. now that's hardcore emo.


I will correct you.
He is just a sad loser on drink and drugs.

End of story.

QUOTE (L0ve Hurts @ May 4 2008, 06:36 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'll tell you what REALLY is bad: having your mind infected with the superstitious nonsense of religion 8>

Even thought I agree in a way; it is stupid to mix exclamations of suprise with an invention of the religious mind.

Back to the theme; I liked the poem 8>


Aww! Thank you!
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Who are you to judge someone you only knew for a couple on days on Internet?? If I were BOODY MESS I would lmao! Especially from someone that seems to ask people to ask her new poems
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BLOODY MESS is a bloody mess!

He is seriously creepy.
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