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Not For You


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CannibalCookie

CannibalCookie

    The monster under your bed

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This isn't for you, they tell me
And it makes me want it more
Down the drink,
Then head for the bar
Again and again I go.

This isn't for you, they told her
As they pass 'round the joint
But she takes it anyway
Takes a few hits
And then laughs in their faces

This isn't for you, they told him
As they issued out the masks and guns
But he'll take up the arms
And break through those bank doors
Just to prove he can.

This isn't for you, they'll tell you
And you know you want it more
Try so hard to resist, because you know they'll be pissed
If you know their secrets untold.



Tell me what you guys think. There isn't a consistant rhyme, but oh, well.
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Azrael.

Azrael.

    Wake me up when the world is sane.

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Very good, i like it!
Cool idea. smile.gif
Keep it up.
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CannibalCookie

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    The monster under your bed

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Thank you
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