I love it!
It reminds me of how I feel at school; being torn up and how confused I am and things are sooo bloody damn complicted there argg! why cant those bastards get a life...
Sorry for that I just really needed to say that; going back to a 'propor, polite young woman' lol. But I do love it, it's like when things speak to you, do ya get what i mean or have I made a nutcase of myself?
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Vultures
Started by
LiveToRegret
, Feb 03 2008 08:55 AM
#41
Posted 10 March 2008 - 01:42 PM
#42
Posted 11 March 2008 - 03:02 AM
QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Mar 11 2008, 05:42 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I love it!
It reminds me of how I feel at school; being torn up and how confused I am and things are sooo bloody damn complicted there argg! why cant those bastards get a life...
Sorry for that I just really needed to say that; going back to a 'propor, polite young woman' lol. But I do love it, it's like when things speak to you, do ya get what i mean or have I made a nutcase of myself?
It reminds me of how I feel at school; being torn up and how confused I am and things are sooo bloody damn complicted there argg! why cant those bastards get a life...
Sorry for that I just really needed to say that; going back to a 'propor, polite young woman' lol. But I do love it, it's like when things speak to you, do ya get what i mean or have I made a nutcase of myself?
I think I know the feeling.
When you really connect to something, right?
I'm not sure.
Maybe I'm the nutcase here.
#43
Posted 11 March 2008 - 03:22 AM
QUOTE (xpurexpoisonx006x @ Mar 10 2008, 02:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I love it!
It reminds me of how I feel at school; being torn up and how confused I am and things are sooo bloody damn complicted there argg! why cant those bastards get a life...
Sorry for that I just really needed to say that; going back to a 'propor, polite young woman' lol. But I do love it, it's like when things speak to you, do ya get what i mean or have I made a nutcase of myself?
It reminds me of how I feel at school; being torn up and how confused I am and things are sooo bloody damn complicted there argg! why cant those bastards get a life...
Sorry for that I just really needed to say that; going back to a 'propor, polite young woman' lol. But I do love it, it's like when things speak to you, do ya get what i mean or have I made a nutcase of myself?
Yeah I get what you mean, exactly why I wrote it.
It was how I felt at one point.
#44
Posted 11 March 2008 - 02:22 PM
QUOTE (Different @ Mar 11 2008, 11:02 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think I know the feeling.
When you really connect to something, right?
I'm not sure.
Maybe I'm the nutcase here.
When you really connect to something, right?
I'm not sure.
Maybe I'm the nutcase here.
QUOTE (LiveToRegret @ Mar 11 2008, 11:22 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Yeah I get what you mean, exactly why I wrote it.
It was how I felt at one point.
It was how I felt at one point.
phew, I'm not the nutcase... And neither are you Different or LiveToRegret!
Cool, yeah usually if i write poems or even my stories, their quite personal and are to do with how I feel at the time I wrote them.
Maybe its the same for you.
I also think poems are ment to be related to. Its how you like or dislike a poem and also how the poet gets across part of his/her message.
Sorry for saying so much!
#45
Posted 12 March 2008 - 08:27 AM
Yeah, I kinda think the same.
and nah, it's ok.
Always good to know someone's opinion.
and nah, it's ok.
Always good to know someone's opinion.
#46
Posted 12 March 2008 - 09:49 AM
likewise
#47
Posted 12 March 2008 - 09:52 AM
#48
Posted 12 March 2008 - 12:02 PM
Pretty goddamn good, well done
#49
Posted 12 March 2008 - 02:54 PM
Thankyou.
#50
Posted 15 March 2008 - 04:42 AM
In poetry, your poems can change and evolve depend on your mood when you started writing it, when you were in the middle of writing it, and when you're at the end of writing it.
Everyone sees a certain poem differently because of how they can relate to it, an dhow it speaks out to them.
This is why I like poetry so much.
It's so liquid.
Sorry.
I sound so dorkish.
=]
Everyone sees a certain poem differently because of how they can relate to it, an dhow it speaks out to them.
This is why I like poetry so much.
It's so liquid.
Sorry.
I sound so dorkish.
=]
#51
Posted 15 March 2008 - 05:06 AM
QUOTE (Different @ Mar 15 2008, 12:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
In poetry, your poems can change and evolve depend on your mood when you started writing it, when you were in the middle of writing it, and when you're at the end of writing it.
Everyone sees a certain poem differently because of how they can relate to it, an dhow it speaks out to them.
This is why I like poetry so much.
It's so liquid.
Sorry.
I sound so dorkish.
=]
Everyone sees a certain poem differently because of how they can relate to it, an dhow it speaks out to them.
This is why I like poetry so much.
It's so liquid.
Sorry.
I sound so dorkish.
=]
That doesn't it sounds right; kinda how i feel about poetry too
#52
Posted 15 March 2008 - 05:34 AM
Yeah.
If you look at a lot of people's poems, you can tell how their mood changes.
A lot of the time they write it when they're angry or sad, and you can tell by their word choice. By the end of the poem they've normally calmed down a bit.
And here's something weird about the relating to poems thing.
We read this morbid poem about people catching on fire in English class which got us all depressed, and we showed it to our Biology teacher who laughed and giggled and said it was funny and surreal!
You never know what something might mean to someone.
If you look at a lot of people's poems, you can tell how their mood changes.
A lot of the time they write it when they're angry or sad, and you can tell by their word choice. By the end of the poem they've normally calmed down a bit.
And here's something weird about the relating to poems thing.
We read this morbid poem about people catching on fire in English class which got us all depressed, and we showed it to our Biology teacher who laughed and giggled and said it was funny and surreal!
You never know what something might mean to someone.
#53
Posted 15 March 2008 - 04:43 PM
Herehere.
#54
Posted 16 March 2008 - 04:21 AM
LTR you nicked what i was going to say... oh well
HereHere too lol
HereHere too lol
#55
Posted 16 March 2008 - 05:09 AM
i likey it really good.
#56
Posted 17 March 2008 - 10:38 AM
purexpoisen;
XxNiksxX; thanks.
XxNiksxX; thanks.
#57
Posted 17 March 2008 - 05:38 PM
LTR, you ever going to post some more poems?
#58
Posted 18 March 2008 - 02:22 AM
Not at the moment.
Writers Block. O.o
Writers Block. O.o
#59
Posted 18 March 2008 - 03:40 AM
Aww.
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I want to read more of your poetry.
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I want to read more of your poetry.
#60
Posted 18 March 2008 - 12:11 PM
Sorryyyyyyy
*thinks, thinks! THINKS!!*
It just doesn't work.
*thinks, thinks! THINKS!!*
It just doesn't work.
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