this is kinda short but what do u fink?
I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay
When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer
The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see
I Love You
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
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i love you
Started by
over-emotional
, Feb 18 2008 01:43 PM
#1
Posted 18 February 2008 - 01:43 PM
#2
Posted 19 February 2008 - 10:02 AM
I like it!
Specially the lastparagraph LOL.
Specially the last
#3
Posted 19 February 2008 - 01:42 PM
QUOTE (mYsTiCaL__aNgEl @ Feb 19 2008, 06:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it!
Specially the lastparagraph LOL.
Specially the last
thanks
#4
Posted 19 February 2008 - 01:46 PM
QUOTE (mYsTiCaL__aNgEl @ Feb 19 2008, 03:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it!
Specially the lastparagraph LOL.
Specially the last
#5
Posted 19 February 2008 - 02:11 PM
lol, remind me never to screw with your heart,
i dont like being decked, lol
loved it
i dont like being decked, lol
loved it
#6
Posted 20 February 2008 - 03:55 AM
i like your poem its cool spesho the last paragraph it short sweet nd staright to the point if you no what i mean xx
#7
Posted 28 February 2008 - 12:50 PM
thnx for the comments guys
#8
Posted 28 February 2008 - 01:05 PM
QUOTE
I Love You
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
I liked the whole thing but that last paragraph really sticks.
#9
Posted 28 February 2008 - 01:07 PM
I love this poem...So much feeling...
But make sure you inform your Bf/Gf (I think its a bf) of this...he/she may want to be warned ^^
But make sure you inform your Bf/Gf (I think its a bf) of this...he/she may want to be warned ^^
#10
Posted 29 February 2008 - 08:37 AM
QUOTE (emotionalhazard @ Feb 28 2008, 09:07 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I love this poem...So much feeling...
But make sure you inform your Bf/Gf (I think its a bf) of this...he/she may want to be warned ^^
But make sure you inform your Bf/Gf (I think its a bf) of this...he/she may want to be warned ^^
tis a bf lol ur probs ryt i shud warn him... ah well he will find out if he does lol
#11
Posted 29 February 2008 - 09:25 AM
QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 29 2008, 04:37 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
tis a bf lol ur probs ryt i shud warn him... ah well he will find out if he does lol
good....I think I should warn Ryan about me >.>
#12
Posted 29 February 2008 - 09:29 AM
QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 18 2008, 01:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
this is kinda short but what do u fink?
I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay
When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer
The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see
I Love You
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay
When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer
The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see
I Love You
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
I LOVE IT!!! ^-^
itz awsome
#13
Posted 29 February 2008 - 10:13 AM
lol, that's pretty awesome.
#14
Posted 29 February 2008 - 03:26 PM
QUOTE (emotionalhazard @ Feb 29 2008, 05:25 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
good....I think I should warn Ryan about me >.>
who is ryan? SPILL lol
#15
Posted 29 February 2008 - 03:28 PM
Haha that's cute, sweet, and so true all at the same time! Nice job! -_^
#16
Posted 29 February 2008 - 03:36 PM
QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 18 2008, 03:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
this is kinda short but what do u fink?
I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay
When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer
The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see
I Love You
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay
When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer
The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see
I Love You
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
hahaha!!
i loved it!!
especially the ending!!
it made me lol.
#17
Posted 29 February 2008 - 03:36 PM
QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 18 2008, 03:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
this is kinda short but what do u fink?
I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay
When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer
The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see
I Love You
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay
When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer
The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see
I Love You
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
hahaha!!
i loved it!!
especially the ending!!
it made me lol.
#18
Posted 01 March 2008 - 04:33 AM
QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 18 2008, 01:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I Love You
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!
Nice way to make him feel safe. Just kidding. But that did make me laugh. I applaud you. *high 5*
#19
Posted 01 March 2008 - 04:40 AM
Um...LiveToRegret...its a he..
#20
Posted 01 March 2008 - 04:47 AM
QUOTE (emotionalhazard @ Mar 1 2008, 04:40 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Um...LiveToRegret...its a he..
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