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this is kinda short but what do u fink?

I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay

When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer

The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see

I Love You

But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!

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I like it!
Specially the last paragraph LOL.

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QUOTE (mYsTiCaL__aNgEl @ Feb 19 2008, 06:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it!
Specially the last paragraph LOL.


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QUOTE (mYsTiCaL__aNgEl @ Feb 19 2008, 03:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it!
Specially the last paragraph LOL.



WHYmust you underline and slash words in every sentence!?
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lol, remind me never to screw with your heart,
i dont like being decked, lol

loved it
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i like your poem its cool spesho the last paragraph it short sweet nd staright to the point if you no what i mean xx
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thnx for the comments guys smile.gif
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I Love You

But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!


I liked the whole thing but that last paragraph really sticks.
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I love this poem...So much feeling...

But make sure you inform your Bf/Gf (I think its a bf) of this...he/she may want to be warned ^^
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QUOTE (emotionalhazard @ Feb 28 2008, 09:07 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I love this poem...So much feeling...

But make sure you inform your Bf/Gf (I think its a bf) of this...he/she may want to be warned ^^


tis a bf tongue.gif lol ur probs ryt i shud warn him... ah well he will find out if he does lol
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QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 29 2008, 04:37 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
tis a bf tongue.gif lol ur probs ryt i shud warn him... ah well he will find out if he does lol


good....I think I should warn Ryan about me >.>
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QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 18 2008, 01:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
this is kinda short but what do u fink?

I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay

When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer

The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see

I Love You

But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!

I LOVE IT!!! ^-^
itz awsome
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lol, that's pretty awesome.
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QUOTE (emotionalhazard @ Feb 29 2008, 05:25 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
good....I think I should warn Ryan about me >.>


who is ryan? SPILL lol

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Haha that's cute, sweet, and so true all at the same time! Nice job! -_^
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QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 18 2008, 03:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
this is kinda short but what do u fink?

I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay

When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer

The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see

I Love You

But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!


hahaha!!
i loved it!!
especially the ending!!
it made me lol. smile.gif

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QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 18 2008, 03:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
this is kinda short but what do u fink?

I know it's not forever
This could be our very last day
But i love you and a broken heart
Is a tiny price to pay

When all alone or in a crowd
My mind begins to wonder
All I see is you
And I cant stand it any longer

The way you look
The secret smiles you give me
I want to hug and kiss you
For the whole world to see

I Love You

But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!


hahaha!!
i loved it!!
especially the ending!!
it made me lol. smile.gif

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QUOTE (Emo-ollie @ Feb 18 2008, 01:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I Love You

But here's the catch
Screw with my heart
and i'll floor you!


Nice way to make him feel safe. Just kidding. But that did make me laugh. I applaud you. *high 5*
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Um...LiveToRegret...its a he..
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QUOTE (emotionalhazard @ Mar 1 2008, 04:40 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Um...LiveToRegret...its a he..

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