i write way to much...but im gonna post a few here.i guess.i got nothing better to do.
Time passes by
coldness envelopes my mind
and somehow
i know im dieing
deep inside
im colapsing
falling apart
and knowing it
helps me none
i still die
------------------
shes hurting inside
inside shes died
and her plan tonight
to take her life
the world knows shell try
they expect she will die
she wants to be saved
her wrist are engraved
shes waiting for someone
before shes done
for shes hurting inside
inside shes died
out side shes died
no one had tryied
so now she lays cold
dead and alone
shes dead
shes dead-----------------
clouds hover above
giving way to rain
covering the streets it may
as eyes full of expression
watch
watching watching the rain fall
a child is watching
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just a few poems i write
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some person
, Nov 11 2007 08:37 AM
#1
Posted 11 November 2007 - 08:37 AM
#2
Posted 11 November 2007 - 10:15 AM
i like them
the second is my fav
the second is my fav
#3
Posted 11 November 2007 - 10:55 AM
thanx..i wasnt even sure i was going to put that one up cause i wasnt to sure it was much good
#4
Posted 11 November 2007 - 02:04 PM
well im glad u posted it
its really good
its really good
#5
Posted 11 November 2007 - 02:37 PM
thanx^_^
#6
Posted 11 November 2007 - 02:59 PM
Very good poems.
#7
Posted 11 November 2007 - 03:04 PM
thanx..
i write alot
i have like somewhere around 200
i write alot
i have like somewhere around 200
#8
Posted 11 November 2007 - 10:56 PM
yeh the 2nd ond is totally my fav.
but all of them were reallie good!
but all of them were reallie good!
#9
Guest__*
Posted 12 November 2007 - 12:08 AM
liked all of them
#10
Posted 12 November 2007 - 07:48 AM
ty
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