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Jordan

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I didn't name this poem / song is why i called it "Untitled?"

QUOTE
I'll stand in the darkness
and lauph at your pain.
forgoteness,
life breaks into a sweat,
as one heart's broken.

Heat, betwine us?
Why do I stand alown,
Am I unkown?
Unbarable!

Perfect?

1,000 years of pain,
1,000 days of light,
1,000 hours of you,
1,000 minutes I have being waiting!

I'll stand in the darkness
and once again lauph at your pain.
forgoteness,
life breaks into a sweat,
as one heart's broken.

You don't know who i am,
I hide my face,
bring my life from the shadows,
I will stand for the right too fight,
for my life!

I'm sick of being in pain,
I'm sick of the torcher,
the lies that you tell me too,
this is the end.

IT'S YOUR TURN!

My heart is mutch more than yours could be,
My words and rhymes come from my sole, that's something you can't buy!
With you cheap ass lies,
hiding behind your descise.

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Jordan

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No one?
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QUOTE (Jordan @ May 13 2008, 11:19 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
No one?


its pretty good
lol

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