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Before I Sleep


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Before i sleep
things pop up in my head
what am i supossed to do
who am i supposed to be
and where is the life i had when i was 7

7 , hmm the magical number
i like that, do you
we all love magic
but who loves 16
who could 16 love
and would you love 16

So can you judge people for the numbers wich they are
and say that you hate a 10
i know many wich are 16 and i know many who are nr 1
but who am i, maybe im not even a number
and am i supossed to be a number at all
do i even smell the same air as you
do i even belong on this planet
you can just judge me from my number, if you can put a number on me

and when i wake up my silly thoughts about where i belong are forgotten
and i can continue living another day full of questions and new ideas







hey this is a poem i just wrote, it could be nice if every below wanted to make a poem ,with the ttle before i sleep, to see what thoughts they have before they sleep, and please drop the emo a bit all poems doesnt have to be , "my heart beats in breakdowns, i cut my self every night" pls come up with some original smile.gif hope you liked this i dont give these poems alotta time and poems dont have to so, i hope u write right from ur heart into this post:)



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Numbers are numbers. Who will be the judge? You are 16, I 17 but these are only numbers.
We are the same. We are one. Who dares to be the judge?We live. We eat. We sleep. We age
day by day. Numbers are only numbers. You are 16, I 17 but we are one.
Who dares to be the judge?
We are both number 1.

Now we can fall asleep.
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QUOTE (shadowboi @ Apr 28 2008, 09:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Numbers are numbers. Who will be the judge? You are 16, I 17 but these are only numbers.
We are the same. We are one. Who dares to be the judge?We live. We eat. We sleep. We age
day by day. Numbers are only numbers. You are 16, I 17 but we are one.
Who dares to be the judge?
We are both number 1.

Now we can fall asleep.


hah very nice shadow this it what im talking about wink.gif
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Thoughts running through my head
on the verge between reality and dream
the breath of my best friend
lying beside me snoring in his sleep

Thinking back
was it what I wanted
seeing her their
cut up in the operation room
blood starting to run upwards
what was I doing in that room

His howl above all
strangled by the weight of his tongue
scared in pain
who would ever know

Thoughts running through my head
he's right beside me
if he's in pain I can't tell
did it hurt back then
did you howl like him
I'll never know



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QUOTE (Mobbe-pingvin @ Apr 28 2008, 10:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thoughts running through my head
on the verge between reality and dream
the breath of my best friend
lying beside me snoring in his sleep

Thinking back
was it what I wanted
seeing her their
cut up in the operation room
blood starting to run upwards
what was I doing in that room

His howl above all
strangled by the weight of his tongue
scared in pain
who would ever know

Thoughts running through my head
he's right beside me
if he's in pain I can't tell
did it hurt back then
did you howl like him
I'll never know



sweet poem smile.gif<3 we all have difrent thoughts b4 we fall a sleep ic biggrin.gif

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QUOTE (HandsDown @ Apr 28 2008, 10:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
sweet poem smile.gif<3 we all have difrent thoughts b4 we fall a sleep ic biggrin.gif


Thanks biggrin.gif Yup, and it's different from night to night too..
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very creative.. I give you a *thumbs up* and *high five*
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QUOTE (..NeVeR aGaIn.. @ Apr 28 2008, 10:48 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
very creative.. I give you a *thumbs up* and *high five*


haha ok thx i needed thatxD
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QUOTE (HandsDown @ May 2 2008, 01:22 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
bump


lol bumb if someone did a topic like this i would spam it upo with poems about before u sleep bcuz its something all can relate too

come on just another poem;p
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Now i lay me down to sleep,
Knowing that my friends will weep,
I will die before i wake
And pray to god, my soul to take.

Just one more night inside this cage
My body and spirit full of rage
But what your love does to me;
I drop the blade before i bleed.

True love that saved one more life
Stopped the gun, stopped the knife
And what i'm going to do right now,
Is say goodnight and take a bow.
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i lurve this poem, its kinda random... like me! it made me kinda happy in a weird way!
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