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She's Already Gone


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CannibalCookie

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Topic Description (too long for the little bar): I got really mad at this ex-cheerleader bitch who was writing terrible lyrics for some bullshit song about this girl she knew who was kidnapped and raped. I didn't get mad because of what she was writing about, I was mad because with lyrics that bad, she was only disgracing the poor girl who was kidnapped. So I stole her notebook and wrote this poem in it, because I know how it feels to know someone close to you who had that happen to them.

R.I.P. Angie


She's all alone, hiding beneath the bed, huddled near the phone
Would he find her, she didn't know, all she knew was she couldn't go.
The gun held against her head, the whispered words, the steamy breath.

He took her arm and pulled her out, she knew she would die without a doubt
The phone hangs loose, dangles on the cord, panicked man at the other end.
"Are you OK, who should I send?"
Don't go away, they'll be there soon
Don't worry help is almost there.

But by the time the policemen get there...

She's already gone.




Personally, I think it's really bad.
But a message to Marissa Coleman: Learn how to write.
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Wow.
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QUOTE (RipleyXXX @ May 6 2008, 10:12 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Wow.


good wow or bad wow?
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