ok...
umm well some oen wanted me to post two happy poems
i dont know if you can realy consider these two happy or not
but ill post em anyways
ones about my freind..who is liek a sister to me
and one is about love
my sis falls out of bed
starting with her head
next goes her feet
and then she wants to be fed
so what do i do
i squirt her with glue
slap her in the face
and color her hair blue
so now my sis is messed up
her brain quite corupt
and shes gluey and blue
like a chicken she clucks
oh wait i forgot
as far as i ever thought
she was always this dumb
at least so i thought
....this is a poem i wrote when me and her went to camp together
it was an overnight week camp and me and her were sitting on her bed which was above mine and laughing and she almost fell off.at the time i was trying to write some poems and she was writing songs.thats just what we do.shes emo to.but we had been laughing so i wrote this poem...its realy stupid i know.the next one i wrote for my bf cause he always missed me when i went away for camp.and so i wrote htis
i love you no matter what
i love you forever
i love you even
when you ge tmad
even if you
are unkind at times
i love you even
when ti seems i dont
even when it seems im angry
i cant stop loving you
even if i tried
i love you more
than the rain
i love you more
than everything
even if
it seems i dont
i love you dearly
and thats the truth
i love youy so much
i dont want to be parted
and when i am
i cry inside
i love you so much
i wrote this poem
just to show
how much i love you
how far my love
for you goes
through the ups and downs
ill always love you
ill always care
ill always need you
i love you lots
im sure by now
you understand
i dont ever
want to lose you
infact im truely
scared i might
so every night
i whisper to the aior
i love you
and hope you hear
by now im sure
you know that i
love you alot
that i love you so much
i wrote this sily poem
and even had
the courage to send it
and by now
im sure you see
id die without you
i love you that much
IF YOU WANT ME TO PUT A FEW MORE OF MY BETTER LOVE POEMS UP I WILL...THIS ISNT MY BEST ONE..I KNOW IT SUCKS.BUT I HAVE LIKE TWO R THREE MORE THAT ARE BETTER
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happy poem????
Started by
some person
, Nov 12 2007 08:50 AM
#1
Posted 12 November 2007 - 08:50 AM
#2
Posted 12 November 2007 - 08:52 AM
i think the last one was really good but i diidn't like the first one.
#3
Posted 12 November 2007 - 08:54 AM
lol..wow.ok..thanx.i dont like either of them particularly.my fave poem that i ever wrote is dark angel
#4
Posted 12 November 2007 - 08:55 AM
are all your happy poems to do with love?
#5
Posted 12 November 2007 - 08:58 AM
no.but i dont have many happy ones
almost all of my peoms are sad
or just very truthful which can be sad to
they always have been
i started writing when i was in first grade
they were always sad
last year and over the summer even though i was more depressed than ever i did manage a few happy ones though.
well that is when i was writing one of my books
but since the sumer before the last one ive writen 200.
and ive been writing books
havent finished them though
btu out of 200
i think like only 7 or 8 are actualy happy and 2 more that i losst
almost all of my peoms are sad
or just very truthful which can be sad to
they always have been
i started writing when i was in first grade
they were always sad
last year and over the summer even though i was more depressed than ever i did manage a few happy ones though.
well that is when i was writing one of my books
but since the sumer before the last one ive writen 200.
and ive been writing books
havent finished them though
btu out of 200
i think like only 7 or 8 are actualy happy and 2 more that i losst
#6
Posted 12 November 2007 - 09:00 AM
can u put 1 more happy 1 on plz. i would like to see 1 more
#7
Posted 12 November 2007 - 09:01 AM
ok ok..let me find one and then ill put it up
but if i do that.could you please read my poem dark angel and tell me what you think
but if i do that.could you please read my poem dark angel and tell me what you think
#8
Posted 12 November 2007 - 09:05 AM
(some person)
ok ok..let me find one and then ill put it up
but if i do that.could you please read my poem dark angel and tell me what you think
yea sure 8)
but if i do that.could you please read my poem dark angel and tell me what you think
#9
Posted 12 November 2007 - 09:07 AM
where is the poem dark angel or isn't it up?
#10
Posted 12 November 2007 - 09:20 AM
its up.but its like towards the bottom of the forum page
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