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Just A Poem I Wrote...


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DEFFINATELY not my best poem, they are in a box in my room, but here it goes:

I told you I loved you and I thought you felt the same.
You strung me along, then told me you didn?t love me to.
All I have to say is f*** you.
You acted so sweet.
Like that love was real.
Now I know the truth,
F*** you.
I told you my secrets, told you what was wrong.
Turns out you strung me along.
My heart shattered to pieces when I saw you with another girl.
You were my world and now all I have to say is,
F*** you.




Like I said, quite crap. PM me for some wayyyyyyyyyyy better ones, I might bother to make the walk upstairs. wink.gif
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Are you not allowed to say "fuck" at home ?
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Haha.

Why should I care what my parents think?

They ain't gonna read it, are they?
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I told them you've said the word FUCK. Silly boy !!

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QUOTE (BOODY MESS @ May 2 2008, 03:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I told them you've said the word FUCK. Silly boy !!

For one I'm a girl and for another, I'm not stupid enough to think you did so fuck off.
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Ignore Bloody Mess its great. I lke your use of enjambement, vry nice! cool.gif
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it would really be better uncensored... with all those stars it has a feeling of inachievement IMHO. I can't understand everything with it
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QUOTE (ExCrEmEnT_@_tEa @ May 2 2008, 05:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Ignore Bloody Mess its great. I lke your use of enjambement, vry nice! cool.gif


Awww! Thank you!!!
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QUOTE (Emotronic @ May 2 2008, 06:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
it would really be better uncensored... with all those stars it has a feeling of inachievement IMHO. I can't understand everything with it


Lol. I had to incase my parents came snooping, lol.
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yea...
this is great..
i can use this poem for my gf...
lol
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Cheaky!

Lol. If you do.. I wan de credit!

Thankies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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QUOTE (x.deathcore.x @ May 3 2008, 11:21 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
yea... this is great.. i can use this poem for my gf... lol
OMG you look like an elf! ^-^ lol sorry... I kinda missed the point, eh? XD
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LOL!
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QUOTE (VeNnnGeAnCeThouShaltBeMine @ May 3 2008, 12:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
OMG you look like an elf! ^-^ lol sorry... I kinda missed the point, eh? XD


....Actualy,
You have a point!
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