DEFFINATELY not my best poem, they are in a box in my room, but here it goes:
I told you I loved you and I thought you felt the same.
You strung me along, then told me you didn?t love me to.
All I have to say is f*** you.
You acted so sweet.
Like that love was real.
Now I know the truth,
F*** you.
I told you my secrets, told you what was wrong.
Turns out you strung me along.
My heart shattered to pieces when I saw you with another girl.
You were my world and now all I have to say is,
F*** you.
Like I said, quite crap. PM me for some wayyyyyyyyyyy better ones, I might bother to make the walk upstairs.
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Just A Poem I Wrote...
Started by
RipleyXXX
, May 01 2008 10:00 AM
#1
Posted 01 May 2008 - 10:00 AM
#2
Posted 01 May 2008 - 01:32 PM
Are you not allowed to say "fuck" at home ?
#3
Posted 02 May 2008 - 06:57 AM
Haha.
Why should I care what my parents think?
They ain't gonna read it, are they?
Why should I care what my parents think?
They ain't gonna read it, are they?
#4
Posted 02 May 2008 - 06:59 AM
I told them you've said the word FUCK. Silly boy !!
#5
Posted 02 May 2008 - 07:01 AM
QUOTE (BOODY MESS @ May 2 2008, 03:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I told them you've said the word FUCK. Silly boy !!
For one I'm a girl and for another, I'm not stupid enough to think you did so fuck off.
#6
Posted 02 May 2008 - 08:31 AM
Ignore Bloody Mess its great. I lke your use of enjambement, vry nice!
#7
Posted 02 May 2008 - 09:23 AM
it would really be better uncensored... with all those stars it has a feeling of inachievement IMHO. I can't understand everything with it
#8
Posted 03 May 2008 - 12:38 AM
QUOTE (ExCrEmEnT_@_tEa @ May 2 2008, 05:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Ignore Bloody Mess its great. I lke your use of enjambement, vry nice!
Awww! Thank you!!!
#9
Posted 03 May 2008 - 12:40 AM
QUOTE (Emotronic @ May 2 2008, 06:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
it would really be better uncensored... with all those stars it has a feeling of inachievement IMHO. I can't understand everything with it
Lol. I had to incase my parents came snooping, lol.
#10
Posted 03 May 2008 - 02:21 AM
yea...
this is great..
i can use this poem for my gf...
lol
this is great..
i can use this poem for my gf...
lol
#11
Posted 03 May 2008 - 02:56 AM
Cheaky!
Lol. If you do.. I wan de credit!
Thankies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
Lol. If you do.. I wan de credit!
Thankies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
#12
Posted 03 May 2008 - 03:47 AM
QUOTE (x.deathcore.x @ May 3 2008, 11:21 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
yea... this is great.. i can use this poem for my gf... lol
OMG you look like an elf! ^-^ lol sorry... I kinda missed the point, eh? XD
#13
Posted 03 May 2008 - 04:06 AM
LOL!
#14
Posted 03 May 2008 - 04:17 AM
QUOTE (VeNnnGeAnCeThouShaltBeMine @ May 3 2008, 12:47 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
OMG you look like an elf! ^-^ lol sorry... I kinda missed the point, eh? XD
....Actualy,
You have a point!
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