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The Shit That I Go Through.....


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Everyday I think,
Everyday I wonder,
Will my life change?
will I continue to suffer?

Day by day things keep getting worse,
Its like some fucked up curse...,
I think my hearts gonna burst.

I cant stop thinking....,
Does he love me?
God damn this shit bugs me.

My razor blade is like my best friend..,
It sticks with me till the end...,
I cant believe it never bends,
It stays straight and strong,
Its always there for me when I need it.

I feel relived as the cold, sharp, thin blade goes deep into my skin..,
Releasing all the pain as it gushes out blood,
Its like a big puddle of mud,
But reality check its all pure beat red blood.

Now I can feel the hole in my heart grow deeper and deeper every second,
As I start feeling nothing,
I think its came to the end,
Everyone's gonna lose a great friend.....




so far this has been one of my best poems yet!!!


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I feel like I can understand you. At least on this:

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My razor blade is like my best friend..,


It's mine, too!
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QUOTE (Emotronic @ May 2 2008, 01:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I feel like I can understand you. At least on this:



It's mine, too!

i always keep a blade or two in my purse or backpack....

i never go anywhere without one...
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I Love It...
I Can Relate To It...
And You Seem Pretty Good At Writing Poems...
X x X
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QUOTE (-=♥Jess♥Rock♥= @ May 15 2008, 08:35 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I Love It...
I Can Relate To It...
And You Seem Pretty Good At Writing Poems...
X x X

thank you so much.
i actually just started writing about 2-3 months ago, so im new at it.
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QUOTE (*DeathDolly* @ May 2 2008, 08:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I feel relived as the cold, sharp, thin blade goes deep into my skin..,
Releasing all the pain as it gushes out blood,
Its like a big puddle of mud,
But reality check its all pure beat red blood.


wow that was awesome i really like this bit

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QUOTE (XnewtX @ May 16 2008, 01:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wow that was awesome i really like this bit

thank you.
i like that part too.
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