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My dear love whispering as a dove,you have a blackned heart,thy taste is sweet and never tart.I gave you everything.When I look at you I hear thy angels and birds sing.You are my great this is(that is)no debate.Let two tortured souls rise to love,I love you to my demise,my (great)whispering dove.
()=possible add on or alternative wording.
*Inspired by Angelia North*
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Whispering Dove
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emoboy369
, May 02 2008 06:43 PM
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Posted 02 May 2008 - 06:43 PM
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Posted 03 May 2008 - 07:36 AM
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thats really good keep it up!!!!
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Posted 03 May 2008 - 06:40 PM
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Ty...should I show it to who inspired me to write it?
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Posted 03 May 2008 - 09:00 PM
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QUOTE (*BlackTears* @ May 3 2008, 08:36 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
thats really good keep it up!!!!
Nice, i liked it, keep it up.
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Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:51 AM
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Yes you should, they'd be very happy :')
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Posted 07 May 2008 - 05:33 PM
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Awws thnks guys ,I showed it to my friend and lied and said was to my cousin,which its not.he liked it and said"wow I never expected from you,no wonder u make a's inenglush class"hehe!
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Posted 08 May 2008 - 06:03 PM
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perfect for me!!!it was so related to me!!
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Posted 15 May 2008 - 07:31 PM
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How?Oh and bad news guys,she wasn't at school that do I could so I decided to wait 2 days then foot but the day she came back she said she had recently got a boyfriend and everyone ragged me...I almost went back to cutting but thought of her and friends and stopped.Her bf "nikky"is better than me, skinnier,longer hair(I have to have short hair for school),and they like each other.Fuck this bs!
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