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Whispering Dove


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emoboy369

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My dear love whispering as a dove,you have a blackned heart,thy taste is sweet and never tart.I gave you everything.When I look at you I hear thy angels and birds sing.You are my great this is(that is)no debate.Let two tortured souls rise to love,I love you to my demise,my (great)whispering dove.


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*Inspired by Angelia North*
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thats really good keep it up!!!!
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Ty...should I show it to who inspired me to write it?
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QUOTE (*BlackTears* @ May 3 2008, 08:36 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
thats really good keep it up!!!!

Nice, i liked it, keep it up.
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Yes you should, they'd be very happy :')
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Awws thnks guys ,I showed it to my friend and lied and said was to my cousin,which its not.he liked it and said"wow I never expected from you,no wonder u make a's inenglush class"hehe!
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perfect for me!!!it was so related to me!!
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How?Oh and bad news guys,she wasn't at school that do I could so I decided to wait 2 days then foot but the day she came back she said she had recently got a boyfriend and everyone ragged me...I almost went back to cutting but thought of her and friends and stopped.Her bf "nikky"is better than me, skinnier,longer hair(I have to have short hair for school),and they like each other.Fuck this bs!
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