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And Just Another Poem I Wrote...


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he's my boyfriend <3
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I also thought it was about Booty Mess but good poem either way.
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Do you have mental health problems cos loving him....

Excuse me while I go puke meh guts up.

Lol
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really nice poem Applause.gif
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I second that.
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QUOTE (RipleyXXX @ May 5 2008, 11:38 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Do you have mental health problems cos loving him....

Excuse me while I go puke meh guts up.

Lol

Do you want some pills for your digestion problems ?
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Thank you guys!
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hmmm sorry i dont think thats 2 good lol. i think u should work more on picturing meaning and not being so straightforward. your text maybe sounds more brutal or raw but it also sounds n00bish imo...
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QUOTE (BOODY MESS @ May 5 2008, 02:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Do you want some pills for your digestion problems ?


I would do anything to strangle you.
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that was good. you put your heart in it.. and it got the mean acoss...
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hey im sry no 1 takes ur poem seriously
=(
i do i think its actually realy good
keep going!
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QUOTE (emo-depression @ May 12 2008, 07:35 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
hey im sry no 1 takes ur poem seriously
=(
i do i think its actually realy good
keep going!


Thanks so much!
I will!
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