he's my boyfriend <3
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And Just Another Poem I Wrote...
Started by
RipleyXXX
, May 03 2008 04:14 AM
#21
Posted 04 May 2008 - 11:48 AM

#22
Posted 04 May 2008 - 02:16 PM

I also thought it was about Booty Mess but good poem either way.
#23
Posted 05 May 2008 - 01:38 AM

Do you have mental health problems cos loving him....
Excuse me while I go puke meh guts up.
Lol
Excuse me while I go puke meh guts up.
Lol
#24
Posted 05 May 2008 - 02:48 AM

really nice poem

#25
Posted 05 May 2008 - 04:59 AM

I second that.
#26
Posted 05 May 2008 - 05:26 AM

QUOTE (RipleyXXX @ May 5 2008, 11:38 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Do you have mental health problems cos loving him....
Excuse me while I go puke meh guts up.
Lol
Excuse me while I go puke meh guts up.
Lol
Do you want some pills for your digestion problems ?
#27
Posted 05 May 2008 - 06:40 AM

Thank you guys!
#28
Posted 05 May 2008 - 08:51 AM

hmmm sorry i dont think thats 2 good lol. i think u should work more on picturing meaning and not being so straightforward. your text maybe sounds more brutal or raw but it also sounds n00bish imo...
#29
Posted 11 May 2008 - 11:02 AM

QUOTE (BOODY MESS @ May 5 2008, 02:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Do you want some pills for your digestion problems ?
I would do anything to strangle you.
#30
Posted 11 May 2008 - 07:50 PM

that was good. you put your heart in it.. and it got the mean acoss...
#31
Posted 12 May 2008 - 10:35 AM

hey im sry no 1 takes ur poem seriously
=(
i do i think its actually realy good
keep going!
=(
i do i think its actually realy good
keep going!
#32
Posted 13 May 2008 - 08:38 AM

QUOTE (emo-depression @ May 12 2008, 07:35 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
hey im sry no 1 takes ur poem seriously
=(
i do i think its actually realy good
keep going!
=(
i do i think its actually realy good
keep going!
Thanks so much!
I will!
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