This is my first draft:
I can never forget you - the way you rock the girls
they move a world and love you - a blast in the underworld
I stick a knife in my head - thinking 'bout your eyes
but now that you been shot dead - I've got a new surprise
I been waitin' for you just to say
he's off to check his mind
but all I know is you got no money
but that's got nothing to do with a good time
can you forgive the boy who - shot you in the head
or should you get a gun and - go and get revenge?
a 100% of an EMO - up to you true star
it's hard to believe you took off - I always thought you'd go far
but I've been around the world a million times
and all you men are slime
it's goin' to my head, goodbye I am dead
wastewood rockers is time for cryin', hey!
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100% Emo
Started by
Homesick Emo
, May 04 2008 02:16 PM
#1
Posted 04 May 2008 - 02:16 PM

#2
Posted 04 May 2008 - 09:22 PM

Not sure what I understood, but that sure sounds KINKY! But it's good!!
#3
Posted 05 May 2008 - 01:09 AM

but I've been around the world a million times
and all you men are slime
and all you men are slime

#4
Posted 05 May 2008 - 05:22 AM

I like your style, little joe. Not bad.
#5
Posted 05 May 2008 - 01:03 PM

Am I detecting a bit of twisted jealousy? Seriously, am I, is that involved?
It's a good poem, no matter what it's about!
It's a good poem, no matter what it's about!
#6
Posted 05 May 2008 - 02:02 PM

It's about my friend, Jc, who was shot in a gunfire... He was too young to die.
#7
Posted 07 May 2008 - 12:44 PM

QUOTE (Homesick Emo @ May 5 2008, 03:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's about my friend, Jc, who was shot in a gunfire... He was too young to die.
oohhhhh...now I feel stupid and heartless. I'm sorry
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