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Roses

Roses

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Torn away
From saving grace

Lie with me here,
It?s my last day.

Tearstained angels
Dressed in lace

Quickly turn
To hide their face.

Immortal, Immoral
Strengthened, Stiffened

Stop and stare
Stop and listen

Please be careful,
You might break him.

Over and over and never again.



First of all I need help with a title and second of all do you think it's good enough for DeviantART? I try to only put my best work there.

2008 Rebecca Secludere, http://flyingantelopes.com
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Withered like Roses

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This is simply one of the BEST poems I have -ever- read

Props to you for being able to write so well, I wish I had your talent.

11/10
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QUOTE (Blackmist @ May 4 2008, 06:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This is simply one of the BEST poems I have -ever- read

Props to you for being able to write so well, I wish I had your talent.

11/10


SERIOUSLY!? Thank you SO MUCH!! You just made my day.
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