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Existence


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Roses

Roses

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Finally
End of time
Set your fires
Leave behind
What you?ve left
Tearstained, bloodstained
A love that existed
Now has died.

Don?t stop to think
Of your misfortune.
Your constant pain
Shall remain ignored.

Devote your life
To sweet seclusion
You don?t need anyone,
Anyone else.

Stay away from the windows
Keep out of the light
You no longer exist,
No matter how much you try.



Not my best work, considering it's a few months old, but I like certain parts.

2008 Rebecca Secludere, http://FlyingAntelopes.com
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Blood

Blood

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I like it, especially the ending. Good job.
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