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In The Silence

She lies there in the silence
Engulfed in the flames of a romance
Dangerously close to the words
That she'll never have to say
Words are trivial
She can see it burning in her lover's eyes
Why even say it?
When they both can see it
A breath slips,
And then a word...
And that word blooms into three
Breaking the silence

It's short, but I like how it turned out ^-^
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Its not another stupid poem about razorblades.. i like it
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QUOTE (' date='Aug 28 2007, 03:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
In The Silence

She lies there in the silence
Engulfed in the flames of a romance
Dangerously close to the words
That she'll never have to say
Words are trivial
She can see it burning in her lover's eyes
Why even say it?
When they both can see it
A breath slips,
And then a word...
And that word blooms into three
Breaking the silence


very true, that happens alot with some people^^

i really liked it. 4 me its pretty relateable biggrin.gif what else u got??? its rlly good!
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