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Insults!


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This poem is sumfing i just jotted down tonyt after having a load of insults thrown at me today
all comments welcome... good and bad

Title: Insults

"Hey Emo!" they yell at me,
"Oi Freak!"
I mutter "ignore it",
turn away,
Stare at the floor and sigh,
Here begins another day

"Faggot! Gay Boy! Queer!"
The insults never stop
Each word causing more misery
The world is laughing at me

"Shit Head! Dick Munch! Cock Sucker!"
The tears begin to fall
And the world just laughs harder

Now alone, in my room, in silence
I close my eyes
my head fills once more with insults

I clasp my hands over my ears
screaming "Make it stop! Make it stop"
nothing changes

My hand grabs at the blade on my desk
I push it into my wrist,
and pull back

Darkness surrounds me
But all I can do is smile
Its over now
And they cant touch me anymore!


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shadowboi

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GOD! Why have I heard all those insults myself? Those words are desighned to hurt. Un-caring ass holes.
My heart crys but the blade is not the answer. The blade is all to final.
Love and understanding are forever.

This was good. Rly sad but i liked it. Keep the faith an hang in there dude.
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awww...try to think of your positive traits,it'll probably make the insults easier to ignore. Peace.gif
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thats a good poem i like it
its deep, i hate useing words like that i hate sterotypes over all
(but not cussing)

i wish i could write stuf like that
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QUOTE (3mo_Sam_sadest_in_life*-* @ May 14 2008, 10:46 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
thats a good poem i like it
its deep, i hate useing words like that i hate sterotypes over all
(but not cussing)

i wish i could write stuf like that


pretty much n e 1 cn ryt poetry or stories if they base it on wat they feel
and those who cnt just have other ways of expressing themselves
give it ago u may suprise urself smile.gif

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