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Soul And Fire


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BLOODY MESS

BLOODY MESS

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It's all a matter of soul and fire
Infatuation or true desire
The thrill of discovery, divine intervention
Cruel, cruel change, pain of rejection
As you walk away, think of all the joy we shared
If you decide you need me, I'll be wondering if I care
Not there to soothe your soul, friend to tender friend
I think our love is coming to an end
King persuader, congratulations
Share her heart, you bought her soul
Princess confusion, come to me again
Saying goodbye was so much fun
When you walk away, feel the freedom in your heart
There's a joy in letting go, free to find a love apart
When I lose control, I need a kind, forgiving friend
But I think our love is coming to an end
I know our love is coming to an end

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Homesick Emo

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Hey man, i forgot to read this one. It's great, awesome.
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Lirael

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I really like the beginning, but then the rhyme scheme gets a little messed up in the middle.
Still, its really good.
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§İReŞMo

§İReŞMo

    my beautiful sin

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really nice poem Applause.gif
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LiteraryDispute

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    <3

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That's really good.
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