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Not A Friend At All


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Homesick Emo

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I'm not a good friend, I'm not a friend at all
It's never resolved, I'm nervous when you call
My words are limp, and my mind is dry
I try to be polite, but I feel like I'm stuck for life
I follow my heart, it leads me far from you
No matter how close we are, I'm far, far away
I have too much now to fill my day today
I'm not a good friend, I'm not a friend at all
I don't need obligations to our crippled conversations
I?d never tell you, it?s something you should know
I'm not a friend at all, oh, please let me go

Somehow I don't trust you
I don't trust myself
And I may never forgive you
?Cuz I can't forgive myself
Somehow I don't trust you
I don't trust myself
And I may never forgive you
?Cuz I can't forgive myself
Don't break my stride
Don't break my stride
Don't break my stride
Don't break my stride


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Trow_Witch

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QUOTE (Homesick Emo @ May 9 2008, 03:48 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I'm not a good friend, I'm not a friend at all
It's never resolved, I'm nervous when you call
My words are limp, and my mind is dry
I try to be polite, but I feel like I'm stuck for life
I follow my heart, it leads me far from you
No matter how close we are, I'm far, far away
I have too much now to fill my day today
I'm not a good friend, I'm not a friend at all
I don't need obligations to our crippled conversations
I?d never tell you, it?s something you should know
I'm not a friend at all, oh, please let me go

Somehow I don't trust you
I don't trust myself
And I may never forgive you
?Cuz I can't forgive myself
Somehow I don't trust you
I don't trust myself
And I may never forgive you
?Cuz I can't forgive myself
Don't break my stride
Don't break my stride
Don't break my stride
Don't break my stride


You're the first emo poet who has successfully caused a headache. The sheer horridity of this piece makes my brain quiver with desires of death and rot.
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~MiNeRvA~

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This could probably be turned into a really good song.
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BLOODY MESS

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I used to have the same feelings, it's unpleasant. Good poem.
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