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Poem My Friend Wrote.

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LiteraryDispute

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    <3

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Some things aren?t always what they seem

But everyday feels so serene

You wonder why things just pass you by

But then you find the answer and immediatly start to cry

You close your eyes and then fall down

And then you die without a sound

They find your body still so warm

But in your heart you are tattered and torn

You are still alive but barely hanging on

You need your strength but its all gone

You start to shake and tremble in fear

The end of you is getting near

Death finally comes to take you away

He decides its not your time and begs you to stay

Louder you scream "Take me, Take me!"

But he goes back to Hell while you break into tears

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BLOODY MESS

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Not bad, not bad. Good rhymes.
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§İReŞMo

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    my beautiful sin

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really nice yours..truly
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