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The Storm That Killed Me

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i can hear it outside
its evry wer
its the sky crying

i can see it
wen i look out my window
it splatters all over the ground

i can feel it
wen i stand in it
its all around me
it falls on my skin

it flashes,
uncovering hidden faces,
making shadows

it crackes,
loud and uncontroable

when i lie in my bed
in the middle of the night
when i can hear it, see it, feel it
i can do it even if i was
blind, deaf, numb

because it goes straight to my heart

the rain
the tears i shed

it splatters
like blood on the floor

its loud
like i screamed
in pain

the sky crys
like he did

the feeling
of the pain

the pain he caused
the pain i caused

the tears we shed

the blood we consumed

our pain
our shattered,broken hearts

the feelings just to much
to stand

when you can hear the suffering
you can feel the pain

and all we want is to never feel it again
to death does my ripped out heart
depart

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its realy that bad that only 8 people can view it
and only can comment it
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really nice poem the last part was really great keep it up Applause.gif
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QUOTE (ScreaMo-Holic @ May 13 2008, 09:10 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
really nice poem the last part was really great keep it up Applause.gif



thx =)
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