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The Object Saga.

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This is now officially where the Object Saga(OS) poems will go!

Here are links to the other OS poems:

http://www.emo-corne...showtopic=17520 ---wicker heart

http://www.emo-corne...showtopic=17704 ---scissors

http://www.emo-corne...showtopic=17791 ---band-aid

http://www.emo-corne...showtopic=17801 ---yours (empty glass)


And here's a new one:


WINDOW

Look into my soul
Through my clear-glass eyes
See the mess you've created.
Don't you know what you do to me?
Don't you know that I love you?
Please see what you've done to me
Look through the window.

There's a world within this being
A world that only sees you
Look into your dimension
Look into my eyes.
Now do you know me?
Now do you understand my love?
Please see what you've done to me
Look through the window.


I want to be in your world
Or at least let you in mine
I want to be yours forever
But I'm trapped behind the glass.
I'm bursting inside
Trying to free myself
Plesae see what you've done to me
Look through the window.

Now, as you turn away
Ashamed by me
Ashamed of my love
You've set me free from my prison
But can't you see you've wounded me?
Can't you see I've nowhere to fly?
Please see what you've done to me
Look at the broken window.

The End.
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Aww. No one's commenting. Poor OS isn't getting any attention.
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again i will say it. awesomeness. you are a one of a kind lydia.
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I know....


wait. really? I mean, i've just been playing. I am? I feel so loved ^.^

Now the rest of you: COMMENT NOW OR I'M GONNA CASTRATE Y'ALL WITH BUTTER KNIVES OR RIP OUT YOUR INTESTINES! whichever seems more painful.
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yes lydia. you are.
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Aww. That's so sweet! *huggles!*
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hey i just realized that i have yet to see a picture of you, but you have seen one of me.
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I have? When have I seen one of you?
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when you were on my profil a few moments ago posting a comment. and i also have four i my gallery,though i dont know if you saw them.
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I love the style in which you write your poetry. Very deep and captivating.
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GLASS ROSE (inspired by a painting)

Lips as blue as sky
Skin as white as moonlight
Flesh as cold as ice,

Your crystaline eyes stare back at me.
Sugar-coated hair
Are you cold out there in the snow?

Ripped open by razor nails
Bleeding deep molasses
Don't let a word escape your frozen mouth.

Precious glass Rose
I can shatter you in a moment
Don't resist the monster
When the monster's got you trapped.

Precious glass Rose
You're as good as broken
Your pieces scattered to the winter winds.

Painful bliss,
They've got all eternity
To mourn beautiful glass Rose.

Beautiful broken Rose.



Just another example of my obscene amazingness. Be jealous, Joshua. Be very jealous. Just Kidding.gif
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Stop, Yeild, Obey (inspired by traffic signs)

There's nothing we can do
But run this light
And go on to see the novelties
We've left to die
There's not future, no innocence
No furthur generations
So yeild
And stop.
And think about it until you drop
Dead.

I've got one word for you
Ticket
A ticket to see the show
The gallows we've disguised as a stage
We never use stunt doubles
See what happens when you misbehave
No second chances
So yeild
And stop.
And think about it until you drop
Dead.

I'll let you go this time
But beware the flashing lights
We're just criminals
And there's hell for believers
We're just liars
We're just decievers
So yeild
And stop.
And think about it until you drop
Dead.



Author's note: I started singing So yeild, and stop, and think about it until you drop. Dead, while my dad got pulled over. His license is now suspened and he's facing fines for driving through a stop sign drunk, and speeding at the same time while also driving recklessly. So basically he's screwed and can't go to a pub until he get's his license back.

Yay me.
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two more amazing poems. i really love the one about the rose.
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Aww, thank you Chris. I was gonna make the yeild yellow and the stop red, to make it a bit more interesting, having the rest of the text be green. But I didn't for some reason.
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o well, they were still awesome
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Not as good as yours.
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better then mine
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Liar. Shall we have a duel?
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not a liar. only the truth passes through my lips. and no i dont want to duel. there are many other things i would prefer to do.
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Statues
Really a song-ey thing, but Oh well.


I'm wishing for your touch
'Cause seeing isn't enough
When the sun sets today
I'd watch you walk away.


But if wishes do come true
Then will I still be with you?
Will you walk away, my dear?
If we could be
Would you still be with me?


You stand by me
And I hold you in my gaze
So oblivious
You wander through the maze.


But if wishes do come true
Then will I still be with you?
Will you walk away, my dear?
If we could be
Would you still be with me?
If wishes do come true
And I was there with you
Would you leave me alone
Or would you still take me home?


You whisper in my ear
Tell me things I don't want to hear
I knew this day would come
If I could move, I'd run.


Wishes don't come true
I'm not here with you.
You still walk away
I'm still here to stay
We could never be
No, you won't stay with me.
Stay with, stay with me.

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