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story of my life


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i like this one-

Tears flowing,
Burning like the sun,
Goodbyes coming,
From the ones you love,
Happiness dying,
Death looks fine,
Unhappy you,
Trapped in your mind,
Family dying,
Leaving you alone,
Friends are moving,
Gone too soon,
Same old city,
Nothing new,
Black and white world,
Surrounding you,
Laughter fading,
Crying echoes,
Life is leaving,
Death beckons.

...i kno, i kno the last one doesnt exactly rhyme
...but i still like it
so tell me what u think
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Loves it!!! Its really good. biggrin.gif
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I think it's awesome.
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thanx ^.^
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Oh wow.
That is so good.
You can feel every word.

What talent.
=]
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Kimi-chan!! Your right this one is good. I love your inspiration! T_T
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anyuu~
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i love it, i bet mine is terrible. urs must be a lot better than mine
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Sucks
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QUOTE (' date='Dec 3 2007, 07:31 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
anyuu~

My life is pretty horrible too....
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