i like this one-
Tears flowing,
Burning like the sun,
Goodbyes coming,
From the ones you love,
Happiness dying,
Death looks fine,
Unhappy you,
Trapped in your mind,
Family dying,
Leaving you alone,
Friends are moving,
Gone too soon,
Same old city,
Nothing new,
Black and white world,
Surrounding you,
Laughter fading,
Crying echoes,
Life is leaving,
Death beckons.
...i kno, i kno the last one doesnt exactly rhyme
...but i still like it
so tell me what u think
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story of my life
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, Nov 28 2007 12:28 PM
#1
Guest__*
Posted 28 November 2007 - 12:28 PM
#2
Posted 28 November 2007 - 04:18 PM
Loves it!!! Its really good.
#3
Posted 28 November 2007 - 04:55 PM
I think it's awesome.
#4
Guest__*
Posted 29 November 2007 - 11:32 AM
thanx ^.^
#5
Posted 29 November 2007 - 02:22 PM
Oh wow.
That is so good.
You can feel every word.
What talent.
=]
That is so good.
You can feel every word.
What talent.
=]
#6
Guest__*
Posted 03 December 2007 - 12:19 PM
Kimi-chan!! Your right this one is good. I love your inspiration! T_T
#7
Guest__*
Posted 03 December 2007 - 06:31 PM
anyuu~
#8
Posted 03 December 2007 - 08:37 PM
i love it, i bet mine is terrible. urs must be a lot better than mine
#9
Guest_No_Desgination_*
Posted 04 December 2007 - 10:20 AM
Sucks
#10
Posted 08 May 2008 - 03:43 PM
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