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My angel...Im not worthy to have to love to hold


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Poll: Did it make you sad (5 member(s) have cast votes)

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I see her walk towards me
My angel dressed in white
She glows like the stars
Her skin is so soft
Her voice sounds so sweet
She gets crowded by people
I know im not worthy of her
I am here standing alone
Drentched by my sadness
Over powered by my lonelyness
I love her
But i cant seem to tell her
I run to my quiet meadow
And cry under the only tree
I go in my pocket to pull out my only friend
It is my razor blade
I slit my wrist
It relieves my pain
I should die for a beauty as hers
So i take my blade
And i cut deeper
She finds me dead
Under the tree that same day
She starts to cry
She finds my razor is my hand
And grabs it
She peirces her soft glowing skin
Till Blood as pure as a rose poors out
She holds my hands
And lays her head on my chest
She closes her eyes
To never open them again
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dude that was awsome
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haha im a girl
and thanks biggrin.gif

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oh well dudett that was awsome and your welcome smile.gif
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lolz most people think im a guy becauz im always talkin bout a girl in my poems but im bisexual so yea tongue.gif
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oh i'm bi to but everyone f%^&ing hates me now and it makes me depressed
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wow i depise people like that i dont get how they hate bisexuals
it pisses me off
but odnt be depressed ...i dont hate you smile.gif

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thanx i don't get y people hate bi's and when people find out they don't classifie u as bi they classifie u as gay and thats wat gets me depressed.
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anytime
yea i knoe they dont kneo how to stick to there lives and not worry bout someone elses
but still dont be depressed smile.gif

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anytime
yea i knoe they dont kneo how to stick to there lives and not worry bout someone elses
but still dont be depressed smile.gif

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yea i see wat u r sayin. thanx
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anytime babe :wink:
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lol
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he he
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hugs
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ooooo i want kisses haha
*hugs*

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will you marry me????

That was so awesome. You are a very talented writer and I hope you continue to produce great work such as this.
-Dallas(aka Rain)
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really :oops: lol
thanks and i am working on another poem at the moment

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i would kiss u but i have a GF
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haha ic its ok
i was just messin witcha :wink:

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