On the news it said,
The world was going to end.
And that?s when it hit me,
You were more than just a friend.
I close my eyes,
And see your beautiful face.
Wishing that right now,
I could feel your embrace.
If the world is ending,
There?s something I gotta do.
And that?s hold you close,
And whisper, ?I love you.?
We go together,
Like hand and glove fits,
And I want you in my arms,
When that asteroid hits.
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September Winning Poem
Started by
stapleinmybutt
, Aug 21 2008 02:33 PM
#1
Posted 21 August 2008 - 02:33 PM
#2
Posted 21 August 2008 - 05:15 PM
OK WELL I HAVE READ SO MANY POEMS ON THIS SITE AND I HAVE TO SAY OUT OF EVERYONE YOU ARE MY FAV WIRTTER. I LIKE YOU STYLE OF WRITTING ND WAT YOU WRITE ABOUT... KEEP UP THE AMAZIN WORK.
P.S. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR PEOMS DON'T STOP EVER... OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWNAND FORCE YOU TOO WRITE.!
P.S. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR PEOMS DON'T STOP EVER... OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWNAND FORCE YOU TOO WRITE.!
#3
Posted 22 August 2008 - 09:06 AM
QUOTE (the_songbird @ Aug 22 2008, 02:15 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
OK WELL I HAVE READ SO MANY POEMS ON THIS SITE AND I HAVE TO SAY OUT OF EVERYONE YOU ARE MY FAV WIRTTER. I LIKE YOU STYLE OF WRITTING ND WAT YOU WRITE ABOUT... KEEP UP THE AMAZIN WORK.
P.S. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR PEOMS DON'T STOP EVER... OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWNAND FORCE YOU TOO WRITE.!
P.S. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR PEOMS DON'T STOP EVER... OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWNAND FORCE YOU TOO WRITE.!
oh my god its Stephen King's 'Misery' all over again!!
xD
seriously though, really good.
#4
Posted 23 August 2008 - 10:26 AM
Wow! Nice poem, I really like it!
xD Jus' checking out the competition.
xD Jus' checking out the competition.
#5
Posted 23 August 2008 - 10:41 AM
i'm just gonna' say this right now...
imo, he is the best writer on here!
(and no, i'm not just sayin' that 'cause he's my boyfriend)
imo, he is the best writer on here!
(and no, i'm not just sayin' that 'cause he's my boyfriend)
#6
Posted 29 August 2008 - 11:30 AM
i like this it's so good! i just hope the world isn't about to end... but you never know!
xxx
xxx
#7
Posted 03 September 2008 - 01:10 PM
Good poem
Truly the best poet
Truly the best poet
#8
Posted 08 September 2008 - 03:53 PM
personally ur my favorite writte here,, loove all of ur poems they always inspire me !
and this one is really good to =)
and this one is really good to =)
#9
Posted 01 June 2009 - 03:11 PM
One of the best.
#10
Posted 20 September 2009 - 02:16 PM
Loved this one. Realy made me smile.
#11
Posted 22 September 2009 - 04:00 PM
That's so amzing. You're really talented! I envy you!
TOO GOOD! x
TOO GOOD! x
#12
Posted 02 October 2009 - 11:46 PM
two thumbs up d=.=b
ROTFLMAO
ROTFLMAO
#13
Posted 28 March 2010 - 06:27 PM
Very good.
#14
Posted 29 March 2010 - 03:02 PM
QUOTE (the_songbird @ Aug 21 2008, 06:15 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
OK WELL I HAVE READ SO MANY POEMS ON THIS SITE AND I HAVE TO SAY OUT OF EVERYONE YOU ARE MY FAV WIRTTER. I LIKE YOU STYLE OF WRITTING ND WAT YOU WRITE ABOUT... KEEP UP THE AMAZIN WORK.
P.S. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR PEOMS DON'T STOP EVER... OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWNAND FORCE YOU TOO WRITE.!
P.S. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR PEOMS DON'T STOP EVER... OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWNAND FORCE YOU TOO WRITE.!
#15
Posted 29 March 2010 - 03:06 PM
poems are like sex it dosent cum right away
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