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September Winning Poem

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stapleinmybutt

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On the news it said,
The world was going to end.
And that?s when it hit me,
You were more than just a friend.

I close my eyes,
And see your beautiful face.
Wishing that right now,
I could feel your embrace.

If the world is ending,
There?s something I gotta do.
And that?s hold you close,
And whisper, ?I love you.?

We go together,
Like hand and glove fits,
And I want you in my arms,
When that asteroid hits.
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the_songbird

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OK WELL I HAVE READ SO MANY POEMS ON THIS SITE AND I HAVE TO SAY OUT OF EVERYONE YOU ARE MY FAV WIRTTER. I LIKE YOU STYLE OF WRITTING ND WAT YOU WRITE ABOUT... KEEP UP THE AMAZIN WORK.

P.S. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR PEOMS DON'T STOP EVER... OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWNAND FORCE YOU TOO WRITE.!
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Hyena.

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QUOTE (the_songbird @ Aug 22 2008, 02:15 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
OK WELL I HAVE READ SO MANY POEMS ON THIS SITE AND I HAVE TO SAY OUT OF EVERYONE YOU ARE MY FAV WIRTTER. I LIKE YOU STYLE OF WRITTING ND WAT YOU WRITE ABOUT... KEEP UP THE AMAZIN WORK.

P.S. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR PEOMS DON'T STOP EVER... OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWNAND FORCE YOU TOO WRITE.!


oh my god its Stephen King's 'Misery' all over again!!
xD
seriously though, really good.
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HeyThereDelilah

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Wow! Nice poem, I really like it!

xD Jus' checking out the competition.
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#5
Grr...

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i'm just gonna' say this right now...
imo, he is the best writer on here!
(and no, i'm not just sayin' that 'cause he's my boyfriend)

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Angel Death

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i like this biggrin.gif it's so good! i just hope the world isn't about to end... but you never know!

xxx
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Good poem
Truly the best poet smile.gif
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variito

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personally ur my favorite writte here,, loove all of ur poems they always inspire me biggrin.gif!
and this one is really good to =)
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XEemoh4Lyfe

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One of the best.
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leftwheel

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Loved this one. Realy made me smile.
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xxSuicide Angelxx

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That's so amzing. You're really talented! I envy you!

TOO GOOD! x
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two thumbs up d=.=b
ROTFLMAO
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Very good.
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QUOTE (the_songbird @ Aug 21 2008, 06:15 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
OK WELL I HAVE READ SO MANY POEMS ON THIS SITE AND I HAVE TO SAY OUT OF EVERYONE YOU ARE MY FAV WIRTTER. I LIKE YOU STYLE OF WRITTING ND WAT YOU WRITE ABOUT... KEEP UP THE AMAZIN WORK.

P.S. I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR PEOMS DON'T STOP EVER... OR I'LL HUNT YOU DOWNAND FORCE YOU TOO WRITE.!


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poems are like sex it dosent cum right away
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