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POEFAN

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The ax of uncertainty
is decimating my forest of hope-
my dreams cannot be;
only nightmares exist, with which I can't cope.

My confidence tis feeble- tis weak!
As angel-kissed dreams beget living nightmares
hitherto comfort, loyalty and love I dost seek!
Alas! This I cannot find, ergo I confirm my fears.

The poniards of lies
rip thy soul apart, leaving thee empty;
Alas! A smile- my disguise.
O! The one who'll save my from this hell- I dont see.

My few dreams- a nepenthe!
Alas! There not tangible, thee dost not exist,
they just cannot be!
Ah, they are but a refreshing mist.
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amazing dude! smile.gif
as always
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this was very good
i liked the rhyming smile.gif
and the last stanza was my favorite part
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