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Justin<3'sTheWorld

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this th first thing tht came to mind!!

u were inches away from leavin this world
u had a bleeding arm and u were so cold
u weren't th person i feel in love u
were completely different so i sit here
wit my razor and i make cuts as u fade
then as i fade away u come and rescue me
u have gave up killing urself to help me i will
truly forever and always love you.

please tell me if i can improve it.
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pretty good
its about eric huh?
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thas okay is it bout eric
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yea tell me how i can improve it
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i dont know how to improve it
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me either
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ok thanks
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my poem

looking at u in my head
unable to say the words
of how i truly feel about u
oh were do i begin
u dont touch me
u dont kiss me
weve never even held hands
i dont get to see u
well ive never seen u
yet ive fallen in love
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i like it
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oh thats goos who is it about
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its about justin
but i dont think he realizes that
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oh how sweet
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no
cuz he is w/ eric
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im sorry
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so am i
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oh =(
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aww justin tht was sweet dude biggrin.gif

and autumn and johnny, dont feel like you are ever going to be pushed away, you never will be, and i love you guys
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oh thx
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np guyz i mean it
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yup
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