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I Won't Let You Go.

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I don't have much to say...I think this says it all.

.:I Won't Let You Go:.

A week I had waited;
For the phone to ring;
And for the doctor to tell us;
It was all just a dream.

The night they came in;
I was on the very edge;
I knew I should be prepared;
For whatever was ahead.

The way she had looked;
When she hung up the phone;
Her eyes were empty;
And I felt alone.

I knew the answer;
To this horrible question;
My mom had cancer;
And I have depression.

What would happen;
If I had to live;
Without my hero and mom;
The results were positive.

Who would have thought;
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.

I promise you this;
You won't end up dead;
'Cause you?ll take my life;
And you'll live instead.

Through all of this;
I think you should know;
That I love you and promise;
I won't let you go.


© Copyright by Taylor Ensminger 2008-Forever
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aww i like it sad.gif i wish i could write good poetry keep it up its awsome poem
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wow this is very good and I relate to it as well good job. alot of emotion
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great job
this is a very good poem
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QUOTE (AbsenseOfLife @ Sep 10 2008, 08:16 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
aww i like it sad.gif i wish i could write good poetry keep it up its awsome poem


Thank you. And you can write...just let it come from very deep inside thats all.
QUOTE (Ziro Valentine @ Sep 11 2008, 01:12 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wow this is very good and I relate to it as well good job. alot of emotion


Thank U
QUOTE (stapleinmybutt @ Sep 11 2008, 03:39 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
great job
this is a very good poem


=] thanks
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Anymore opinions? I could really use the cheer up right now...=\
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I have tears in my eyes. That says it all. Excellent.
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QUOTE (POEFAN @ Sep 13 2008, 08:37 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I have tears in my eyes. That says it all. Excellent.

NO WAYZ! Thats great. That makes me feel...a lil better...not much pain u can take away from how much im in now though...
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I really admire your strength and courage to write this my mum OD'd when I was 14 and i've never had the courage to face my feelings though...
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It's a really good poem smile.gif
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This was amazing. Great job. It made me cry some :3
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QUOTE (Ziro Valentine @ Sep 14 2008, 08:30 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I really admire your strength and courage to write this my mum OD'd when I was 14 and i've never had the courage to face my feelings though...


Oh my God, I'm so sorry to hear that...I wish you the best. And yes it was very hard to write and to read in front of my whole class...however almost everyone was crying with me by the end of it.

QUOTE (.drenched.in.blood. @ Sep 14 2008, 08:52 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's a really good poem smile.gif


Thank you =]

QUOTE (XxPhobiaxX @ Sep 14 2008, 07:04 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This was amazing. Great job. It made me cry some :3


Well thank you...yes i have realized it has that effect on most people. i had to read it in class and yea...the teacher was crying pretty badly and so were some of the kids. its deffinately a hard thing to read/write/share/think about, and even go through.


thank you everyone who has been replying, it really does help me get through it emotionally with all the support...Gawd I love this site, Thanks admin for creating it =] I feel so at home.
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Your really good XD
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QUOTE (tamara... @ Sep 15 2008, 05:19 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Your really good XD

Really? Thank you...

You have no idea how much better I would feel if I won this contest thingy. That would make me feel amazing. My mom would be so proud too. =]
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Wow... this is amazing...
You can tell how much pain your going through, just by the lines in this poem..
I hope ur ok...
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QUOTE (Xx-AxSinglexTear-xX @ Sep 16 2008, 08:46 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Wow... this is amazing...
You can tell how much pain your going through, just by the lines in this poem..
I hope ur ok...

Thank you so much...i am doing better. =]
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QUOTE (мe+eмo♂=Lϖ @ Sep 17 2008, 07:00 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thank you so much...i am doing better. =]



that was a really good peom, mustv been hard...hope you're ok...
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wow Peace.gif that was a really good poem
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it's sad song with a loot of emotions
i'm sorry about your mom

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QUOTE (Lionel_Messi @ Sep 19 2008, 12:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
it's sad song with a loot of emotions
i'm sorry about your mom

Thank you.
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