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I Won't Let You Go.

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#21
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omg. that poem made me cry.
i love it. i hope your ok.
if my mum died i would
not be able to live.
she is my life and i
love her. she is the reason
i am a live.
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QUOTE (the rain hides my tears @ Sep 23 2008, 11:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
omg. that poem made me cry.
i love it. i hope your ok.
if my mum died i would
not be able to live.
she is my life and i
love her. she is the reason
i am a live.

Well i'm glad you liked it. =]
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sad and loving poem, and very touching, but what ever happens, you should know it happens, and i hope you really dont mean "you cant live", theres a purpose for each and every person you know, you seem like a bright girl, im sure your mom would be proud of you for winning

sometimes memories, are the best things in life smile.gif
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QUOTE (JaiHunter @ Sep 24 2008, 06:53 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
sad and loving poem, and very touching, but what ever happens, you should know it happens, and i hope you really dont mean "you cant live", theres a purpose for each and every person you know, you seem like a bright girl, im sure your mom would be proud of you for winning

sometimes memories, are the best things in life smile.gif

What did I win? I don't know...
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heyy luv ya poem how do i add some?
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QUOTE (nOtGoOdEnOuGh @ Sep 26 2008, 02:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
heyy luv ya poem how do i add some?

Thanks.

Ya just do.
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i will only say is perfect. . .happy.gifV keep it a good work happy.gifV
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QUOTE (♫HaSeOxTh♫ @ Sep 28 2008, 04:11 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
i will only say is perfect. . .happy.gifV keep it a good work happy.gifV

awww thank you ^^
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its awsome! and i know how it feels,my uncle had cancer,he died in april from it...............it brings up alot of emotions. keep it up
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QUOTE (мe+eмo♂=Lϖ @ Sep 11 2008, 05:33 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Who would have thought;
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.


Realy loves that part, really tells a story of pure pain sad.gif
genius poem!
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QUOTE (Smells~Like~Teen~Spirit @ Oct 18 2008, 12:06 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
its awsome! and i know how it feels,my uncle had cancer,he died in april from it...............it brings up alot of emotions. keep it up

awhh. i'm sorry.

QUOTE (TigerShot @ Oct 18 2008, 02:37 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Realy loves that part, really tells a story of pure pain sad.gif
genius poem!

...thank you. =D
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YOUR REALLY GOOF....LOVE YOUR POEM
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QUOTE (gothic_emobear @ Oct 22 2008, 06:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
YOUR REALLY GOOF....LOVE YOUR POEM

awe thank you
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wow that was really you could feel the emotion
and i was really emotional it made me cry well done it is a awesome poem Applause.gif
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thats beautiful. i can sense a lot of emotion. you should be a writer.
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QUOTE (XnewtX @ Oct 24 2008, 10:17 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wow that was really you could feel the emotion
and i was really emotional it made me cry well done it is a awesome poem Applause.gif

Sorry for making you cry...But thank you<3

QUOTE (Yazmin @ Oct 24 2008, 10:57 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
thats beautiful. i can sense a lot of emotion. you should be a writer.

Thanks.
Do you really think so?
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It is such a great peom heart & pain felt
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wow!u nearly made me cry from readin that,its so touching.seein such poetry is makin me happy.ive just made my self sound geeky,havent i.ohwell made a fool of myself again.SOB SOB
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OMG I Love it it has alot of emotion and feel:)

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I admire you.
I'm sorry to hear about your mom.
Your poem is amazing though.
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