omg. that poem made me cry.
i love it. i hope your ok.
if my mum died i would
not be able to live.
she is my life and i
love her. she is the reason
i am a live.
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I Won't Let You Go.
Started by
ΜıƶƶЈǝяκ
, Sep 10 2008 07:33 PM
#21
Posted 23 September 2008 - 11:39 PM

#22
Posted 24 September 2008 - 06:35 PM

QUOTE (the rain hides my tears @ Sep 23 2008, 11:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
omg. that poem made me cry.
i love it. i hope your ok.
if my mum died i would
not be able to live.
she is my life and i
love her. she is the reason
i am a live.
i love it. i hope your ok.
if my mum died i would
not be able to live.
she is my life and i
love her. she is the reason
i am a live.
Well i'm glad you liked it. =]
#23
Posted 24 September 2008 - 06:53 PM

sad and loving poem, and very touching, but what ever happens, you should know it happens, and i hope you really dont mean "you cant live", theres a purpose for each and every person you know, you seem like a bright girl, im sure your mom would be proud of you for winning
sometimes memories, are the best things in life
sometimes memories, are the best things in life

#24
Posted 25 September 2008 - 07:53 PM

QUOTE (JaiHunter @ Sep 24 2008, 06:53 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
sad and loving poem, and very touching, but what ever happens, you should know it happens, and i hope you really dont mean "you cant live", theres a purpose for each and every person you know, you seem like a bright girl, im sure your mom would be proud of you for winning
sometimes memories, are the best things in life
sometimes memories, are the best things in life

What did I win? I don't know...
#25
Posted 26 September 2008 - 02:02 PM

heyy luv ya poem how do i add some?
#26
Posted 26 September 2008 - 09:14 PM

QUOTE (nOtGoOdEnOuGh @ Sep 26 2008, 02:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
heyy luv ya poem how do i add some?
Thanks.
Ya just do.
#27
Posted 28 September 2008 - 04:11 PM

i will only say is perfect. . .
V keep it a good work
V


#28
Posted 28 September 2008 - 11:12 PM

QUOTE (♫HaSeOxTh♫ @ Sep 28 2008, 04:11 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
i will only say is perfect. . .
V keep it a good work
V


awww thank you ^^
#29
Posted 17 October 2008 - 11:06 PM

its awsome! and i know how it feels,my uncle had cancer,he died in april from it...............it brings up alot of emotions. keep it up
#30
Posted 18 October 2008 - 01:37 PM

QUOTE (мe+eмo♂=Lϖ @ Sep 11 2008, 05:33 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Who would have thought;
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.
Realy loves that part, really tells a story of pure pain

genius poem!
#31
Posted 18 October 2008 - 06:27 PM

QUOTE (Smells~Like~Teen~Spirit @ Oct 18 2008, 12:06 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
its awsome! and i know how it feels,my uncle had cancer,he died in april from it...............it brings up alot of emotions. keep it up
awhh. i'm sorry.
QUOTE (TigerShot @ Oct 18 2008, 02:37 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Realy loves that part, really tells a story of pure pain 
genius poem!

genius poem!
...thank you. =D
#32
Posted 22 October 2008 - 05:27 PM

YOUR REALLY GOOF....LOVE YOUR POEM
#33
Posted 22 October 2008 - 08:01 PM

QUOTE (gothic_emobear @ Oct 22 2008, 06:27 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
YOUR REALLY GOOF....LOVE YOUR POEM
awe thank you
#34
Posted 24 October 2008 - 09:17 AM

wow that was really you could feel the emotion
and i was really emotional it made me cry well done it is a awesome poem
and i was really emotional it made me cry well done it is a awesome poem

#35
Posted 24 October 2008 - 09:57 AM

thats beautiful. i can sense a lot of emotion. you should be a writer.
#36
Posted 24 October 2008 - 03:36 PM

QUOTE (XnewtX @ Oct 24 2008, 10:17 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wow that was really you could feel the emotion
and i was really emotional it made me cry well done it is a awesome poem
and i was really emotional it made me cry well done it is a awesome poem

Sorry for making you cry...But thank you<3
QUOTE (Yazmin @ Oct 24 2008, 10:57 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
thats beautiful. i can sense a lot of emotion. you should be a writer.
Thanks.
Do you really think so?
#37
Posted 27 October 2008 - 04:34 AM

It is such a great peom heart & pain felt
#38
Posted 28 October 2008 - 08:16 AM

wow!u nearly made me cry from readin that,its so touching.seein such poetry is makin me happy.ive just made my self sound geeky,havent i.ohwell made a fool of myself again.SOB SOB
#39
Posted 31 October 2008 - 10:17 AM

#40
Posted 10 November 2008 - 10:48 AM

I admire you.
I'm sorry to hear about your mom.
Your poem is amazing though.
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I'm sorry to hear about your mom.
Your poem is amazing though.
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