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I Won't Let You Go.

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Thank you so much...i am doing better. =]

It made me cry. You can tell how much pain your going through, just by the lines in this poem.. I hope u really are dong better and not just saying so smile.gif
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i really like it. i wrote one for my mom but i havent posted it yet. my mom died of cancer too, i know its so tough. thats an awesome poem =)
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I realy like it . you wrote realy good Applause.gif
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This almost made me cry.
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QUOTE (AbsenseOfLife @ Sep 10 2008, 11:16 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
aww i like it sad.gif i wish i could write good poetry keep it up its awsome poem



wow i am sorry to hear that .. but that was a awsome poem.. my grandma passed last year and i struggle wit it every day she had kindy cancer .. i miss her
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QUOTE (мe+eмo♂=Lϖ @ Sep 10 2008, 07:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't have much to say...I think this says it all.

.:I Won't Let You Go:.

A week I had waited;
For the phone to ring;
And for the doctor to tell us;
It was all just a dream.

The night they came in;
I was on the very edge;
I knew I should be prepared;
For whatever was ahead.

The way she had looked;
When she hung up the phone;
Her eyes were empty;
And I felt alone.

I knew the answer;
To this horrible question;
My mom had cancer;
And I have depression.

What would happen;
If I had to live;
Without my hero and mom;
The results were positive.

Who would have thought;
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.

I promise you this;
You won't end up dead;
'Cause you?ll take my life;
And you'll live instead.

Through all of this;
I think you should know;
That I love you and promise;
I won't let you go.


© Copyright by Taylor Ensminger 2008-Forever



this is fabulous keep up the good work
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Oh my gosh! This made me cry in real life sad.gif
I can't stop crying; too sad,
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re-read this.

I'm very sorry you had to go through that.
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that was so good! i really liked it
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Hiya.

I really love your peom. Made me cry. I understand why your angry about your mum dieing. My mum died too. So if you need a pair of ears. You know where to find me ok. Take care. Angel





QUOTE (мe+eмo♂=Lϖ @ Sep 10 2008, 08:33 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I don't have much to say...I think this says it all.

.:I Won't Let You Go:.

A week I had waited;
For the phone to ring;
And for the doctor to tell us;
It was all just a dream.

The night they came in;
I was on the very edge;
I knew I should be prepared;
For whatever was ahead.

The way she had looked;
When she hung up the phone;
Her eyes were empty;
And I felt alone.

I knew the answer;
To this horrible question;
My mom had cancer;
And I have depression.

What would happen;
If I had to live;
Without my hero and mom;
The results were positive.

Who would have thought;
That tears had a sound;
That pain had a taste;
That I could break down.

I promise you this;
You won't end up dead;
'Cause you?ll take my life;
And you'll live instead.

Through all of this;
I think you should know;
That I love you and promise;
I won't let you go.


© Copyright by Taylor Ensminger 2008-Forever


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This poem is beautiful and very well written, it has so much feeling in it, I love it bub, keep up the great work!!!

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Applause.gif nice try
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Really Good <3
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this is so sad... i hope you will have a good life
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so sad
but i love it
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it made me want to cry...i love how you played a picture in my mind
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that was amazing just amzing great job
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Great job
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this was amazing
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awh that was so sweet :Cry:
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