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Mom, I Have A Secret

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3/5

I'm not the biggest fan of straight-forward writing, but at least it's real.
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QUOTE (romanticfanaticxoxo @ Dec 21 2008, 01:26 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
3/5

I'm not the biggest fan of straight-forward writing, but at least it's real.

I'm a major fan of it. lol
Thanks
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Really good smile.gif xD 10/5 or if i gots to stay normal...5/5 :/ lol
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wow awsome biggrin.gif
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Thanks smile.gif
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wow its an amazing poem. wow
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Aww,I love it!
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I fap't. Srsly.
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how did you manage to tell her, you must have some guts!!
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Love the poem...i can relate to that.
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Sad sad.gif but still a good poem. smile.gif
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It's well executed, but for me the concept seems a bit worn out. I saw the question, after I read the title (maybe that just due to the fact that great minds thinks alike, lol) I'm probably the last one to give you advice, but try making it more surprising next time. tongue.gif
The form itself is close to flawless. though.
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im flabergasted.. wow.. 100% from me..
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QUOTE (comleteloner @ Dec 23 2008, 06:32 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
how did you manage to tell her, you must have some guts!!

I didn't tell her, she found me kissing a girl.

QUOTE (Personable @ Dec 25 2008, 02:05 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's well executed, but for me the concept seems a bit worn out. I saw the question, after I read the title (maybe that just due to the fact that great minds thinks alike, lol) I'm probably the last one to give you advice, but try making it more surprising next time. tongue.gif
The form itself is close to flawless. though.

I wasn't really trying to make it anything great though, I was just writing down my thoughts. So that would probably be why it was so obvious.
But thanks, I love getting advice.

And thanks to everyone else.
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It is very very good... Gonna show it too my one friend to see if he thinks its good, He loves poetry..

Is that okay?

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I don't give a fuck lol
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brought a tear to my eye
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QUOTE (Erin the Exuberant @ Dec 28 2008, 07:08 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
But thanks, I love getting advice.


I love feedback as well. But as of now, I can't post threads, but could you please have look anyway tongue.gif
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QUOTE (Personable @ Dec 29 2008, 04:20 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I love feedback as well. But as of now, I can't post threads, but could you please have look anyway tongue.gif

I think it's great. Not my cup of tea, but I still liked it.
Don't have time to give out feedback right now, sowwie.
Keep writing
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I'm sure you see I moved thy poem. Nice job.
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