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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 04:23 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Hmm, somehow, I doubt it.
There can't be that much contrast in the qualities of your work, can there?

Yes, depending on how I was feeling when I wrote them.
This and Dead Inside are the only ones I like that I have posted on this site.

and although it is crap, forever and always. Cause that was for Aneraxium <3 biggrin.gif
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Your poems were for Aneraxium?
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 04:46 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Your poems were for Aneraxium?

No, only the 'Forever and Always' one. smile.gif
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I can't find it! =[
Do you have the link?
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 03:59 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I can't find it! =[
Do you have the link?

For what poem, I'm guessing either 'Forever and Always' or 'Dead Inside'?
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Having both would be nice.
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http://www.emo-corne...hl=livetoregret

http://www.emo-corne...hl=livetoregret
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QUOTE (LiveToRegret @ Feb 3 2008, 04:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
the world remains empty
the vulture of humanity still stands
as only we grow small
nothing like a glass vase
caught to be placed on a tray
served to those who look to the sky
how little we must be to them
for those to not care
only pressure and humilation
is at their despare
ask yourself why?
are we worthy? are they?
built apon as scavengers
thoughts are the only thing thats on our side
maybe we are the ones
who should blow with the wind
speak as if god
maybe they know this
and can not bare to be let down
but yet, as if anyones corpse
we stand dead
a black hole of nothingness
we see through the eagles eye
how they dont even pass a glancing eye
doesnt it make you wonder?
makes you feel asthough guilty to die
we are not different
but they choose for they're minds to wonder
we are not in the wrong
but they choose for they're thoughts to win
who are these vultures and why are they here
countless day of watching more appear
they bury our souls
and feed on the flesh
anyone outstanding
is burried
with the rest
dug to the lowest
for a smile among their 'youthful' agressivness
apethetic is felt
the violence leaves the scars
but on whom us
we are not living the lie
we cant, even if we must


wow very very brilliant. sums up exctly what you said it would. i really like your poems. good job smile.gif
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double post
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QUOTE (yopi40 @ Mar 9 2008, 05:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
wow very very brilliant. sums up exctly what you said it would. i really like your poems. good job smile.gif

Lol, thanks. happy.gif
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Thanks
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 05:39 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thanks

It's ok.
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I really like dead inside
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 05:08 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I really like dead inside

Thanks. That was when I fell out with a really good friend. smile.gif
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QUOTE (LiveToRegret @ Mar 9 2008, 09:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thanks. That was when I fell out with a really good friend. smile.gif



aw im sorry
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 06:28 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
aw im sorry

It's ok. We are almost back to how we were. smile.gif
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QUOTE (LiveToRegret @ Mar 9 2008, 09:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It's ok. We are almost back to how we were. smile.gif



That's good. but the key word is "almost"
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QUOTE (Different @ Mar 9 2008, 06:41 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
That's good. but the key word is "almost"

Well, we were close, but we are still friend at the moment smile.gif
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QUOTE (LiveToRegret @ Mar 9 2008, 03:24 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Yes, depending on how I was feeling when I wrote them.
This and Dead Inside are the only ones I like that I have posted on this site.

and although it is crap, forever and always. Cause that was for Aneraxium <3 biggrin.gif


why would you make something for me thats crap? sad.gif lol
kidding xD
i like it the first time I read it and I liked it after reading it again
i love you sophie smile.gif <3

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where are you?!?! lol
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