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The final encounter


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XonefinalgoodbyeX

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He stands in the distance, she stands in the crowd
He√Ę‚?¨‚?Ęs quiet from the loss, her voice rings loud
His only dreams have all been shattered
But to her, it doesn√Ę‚?¨‚?Ęt even matter
Despite everything he√Ę‚?¨‚?Ęs been through, he√Ę‚?¨‚?Ęs still right there
Right where she left, the words are calm, a simple pray
He falls to his knees and punches the ground
Looking for love, but pain was all he found
There√Ę‚?¨‚?Ęs no more faith, no more hope
The love he once had is now the rope
That grips around his neck and tightens everyday
To end this suffering is the only way
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i love this poem.

its really quite amazing.

~julz
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Hey thanks, I think eventually I'm gonna make a band and turn them into songs
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I like it, it is gr8
For some reason when i am walkin about the town
I end up singing some thing out of me head
i write them up if i remember them when i get in the house lol.

Demi
xoxox
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Haha ya thats what I do to. Like when I'm at work or something just write random stuff down all day then go home and put it all together. I wish i could write about something other than sad memories and stuff but I honestly just can't. Not right now at least
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i like it..it kinda remindes me of my life
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i think the band thing is a good idea to
:wink:
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